QUOTE(jootat @ Feb 6 2013, 02:51 PM)
ok, here it goes for two of my bonsai first. Hope to hear some suggestion/advice.
1 i bought it from semenyih nursery and another one is i planted from seed at least 7 years ago.
This one i bought it from the nursery last weekend. Initially it was botak. But now the leave starts to grow leow.
My fail bonsai

... And yesterday i accidentally hit the tree and it got out from the soil. I think i will need to push the soil harder tonight when i go home. Yesterday night was too late and too tired when i accidentally hit it. I know this is a very messy one, and trust me, i got some even worse than this

Hi Jootat,
If I'm not wrong the first photo of "shui mui" you bought is from Sanfong. I've seen quite a lot of this shape there.
It's already 80% done, However I suggest you look into the wiring at the main trunk. Any sign of "eating in", if so
unwire only the main trunk wires.
Another suggestion is that don't put any stone or rock above the soil, in a long run, the weight of the stones or rock is not only
compacting the soil but will also result uneven grow of roots which in turn affect uneven grow of foliage.
For this one which you trained yourself, You are doing a good work.
I suggest you give it a little touch up.

Re pot your " shui mui" in a higher pot, plant it vertical, cover the small exposed roots, leave the big one exposed.
cut the big branches indicated in order to give your tree a balance look. Then cut the top layer of branches shorter, let it have a cone shape image,
wire and pull the lower level of branches a bit lower and let it grow for sometimes before doing further improvement.
This post has been edited by Bonsailelong: Feb 6 2013, 09:52 PM