Oh finally I can see it. But frankly I think its not much different from ur previous one but cleaner. Probably the body proportion....a bit off.. even though it's anime version.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 22 2009, 04:40 PM

All I can say is...superb work

R u using pentool/tablet? If not suggest, just use normal paint brush and control the hardness and opacity to achieve the blending. Color burn is a bit hard without sensitive pressure pen. Or else look up deviant art tutorial on how to use em.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 22 2009, 06:10 PM

Here's ma work. Quick doodle since it's quite active today for some reason.



This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 23 2009, 11:13 AM

Err....where to start.....since u already know what's wrong, I dont think I need to comment further . Drawing with a mouse is a bit tough but there is a way to do it but not as clean as tablet.

...........traditionally or digitally? If digital just use the normal brush on the toolbar and adjust the opacity and hardness to control the blend. If u r using tablet, u need to set up the flow as well.

......I give it an ok, I guess. Its a bit over the top for my taste.

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Added on April 26, 2009, 8:32 amWhich software r u using? If the software have a layering function, it actually helps on the brushing at the corner drawing by using lasso on a clean outline. For paint.net, I found that u can actually blend colors (sharp edged brush) by adjusting the transparency of the brush, alternating it between the two blends. The result may not be as good as photoshop and a bit tougher to use though.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 26 2009, 08:32 AM

It's nice and all but what's the theme here?

Gear with racer?? not a good match Im afraid cause gear represents a lot of things, in fact because u put a pocket watch there makes it even less obvious. Try tyre or the tyre groove pattern.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 28 2009, 02:33 PM

Body proportion still a bit off. The "breast" should be a bit lower and not to shoulder height. Imagine a male's chest and "extrude" it horizontally. Should be around there. There're others as well that need fixing, especially the leg.....looks rubbery. So is the length and proportion of the arms and hands.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: May 7 2009, 04:43 PM

Here's a suggestion. Draw it with black pen. Blanko the error part. When u scan it and auto level it, the white yellowish part will be gone. Less messy as well. Havent try it before though, but I guess it should work.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: May 7 2009, 07:03 PM

Can u at least use photoshop, cut it and enlarge some of the characters? the character proportion sizes from near to the furthest end are bugging me,

Problem with that is that there's a minimum width limit and u cannot use that to erase tiny line accurately. I tried it recently and found out that ordinary blanko should be fine cause u can adjust how u want to the "blanko" ink to spread, either into fine lines or thick. May not look pretty on papers but looks quite fine when u scan and auto level it.

Actually they are all proportionally correct. Probably u view some as off-sized when the character are intended to be giants. Though I have to admit the wrestling guy with the scar and chest hair seem a bit too big compare to the actual design.

Ur art obviously have some that are either too tall (or is it simply standing on a stair way?) and the head slightly bigger than the ones in front. Especially the back rows.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: May 9 2009, 07:35 PM

@ xiong_21

Looks nice but ya do need some more improvement. Keep it up.

@Agito666

The left seems ok but the right still need more improvement on the proportion and stuffs especially the legs.

@steven, No matter what, it's still better to colour it. Still good though.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: May 20 2009, 11:19 PM

@ iMaxJ, Heiii... Not a bad piece....

Wow, superb art! Got deviant account? Would love to view more of ur works.

@doinkz_gaara

Nice work. Though I'm not so sure why this took a month to complete? Is it that u try to arrange the wordings on their faces?

PS: Btw, Big Bang. Is that some sort of a band name?

I think it can be done better than that. Here, recap of ma previous work done with paint.net 100% (including the sketch/drawing....no scanner at the time)



and, (also 100% with paint.net including the sketch/dwg)



This post has been edited by LeechFever: Jun 3 2009, 12:23 AM