Ooo..nice. love the "I got spinach stuck between ma teeth" idea, lol.

My photoshop attempt:



This post has been edited by LeechFever: Mar 25 2009, 11:35 AM

ehhhhh really kah? I thought people like cymon and maranello (btw where are they? ) are better. Aizen not too bad himself. Hexism with his pew pew robots. Yours are good too given proper inking tools.

Btw, these piece ain't doing well in DeviantArt by the looks of the view counts so I thought something must be wrong with my artistic sense, so need some critisms on em .

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Mar 25 2009, 04:55 PM

.............dont have that much time to look for that many* fav....


This post has been edited by LeechFever: Mar 25 2009, 11:06 PM

Oh that. Planned to remove that after I reviewed the pic again in full view but was thinking probably just me again.Thanks for the clarification. Actually I made the glow thingy in the hole of the shoulder because it was meant to be an attachment to another sort of mechanism. Like a demonic aura or link used to fuel whatever it is going to be attached. Just that I havent figure it out how to draw it yet. thanks again for the critique.

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Added on March 26, 2009, 7:19 amNot too shabby. Actually pretty good. Just one improvement that is to darken the line a bit to make it more clear. U can try to convert it to black and white or grayscale first then play around with auto level and brightness/contrast control to make it clearer. U can always change the line colour back with the photoshop tools.

Also I notice u drew something different. Good to have some different once in a while to expand the horizone. lol.

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Added on March 26, 2009, 7:59 amActually Im more into showing off stuff. I mean why keep all the drawings by urself. Kind of sad really and can create illusion that you are better than anyone else like the American Idol participants without knowing the truth (yours on the other hand is very good and detailed, I mean I have seen ur deviant. Just like Picasso, I cant say much though cause dont know how to critique this kind of unique art . More into 3D potrait/scene or anime/mangaish type ). If no critique, what the heck, try posting it again in another forum. If it bound to have not a good reception, doesnt mean u should just give it up.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Mar 26 2009, 02:26 PM

Updated based on slumberus suggestion:



Btw how to erase the previous artwork in deviant art? Cause from the looks of it the previous one still there ?

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Mar 26 2009, 05:23 PM

Actually urs are more like photoshopping (putting stock images together) art, lol. But that is one nice pic u got there with the earth burning and all. Looks like a savior was born in the midst of chaos kind of look.

Ooo..didnt see this. As in how? I erased the 'pillar of light' on the shoulder, edit/replace the old pic file with new one via edit deviation. As can be seen, the old pic with the 'pillar of light' scene is still there on the previous post. Do I need to completely remove the deviant art for that work and resubmit the whole thing again?

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Mar 27 2009, 09:52 AM

Did that, as with the new update, doesnt work. As can be seen from the first post, the link is still there. It's updated but the old one still retain somewhere in deviant server.

Goku will win. 100%. To Mclelun, nice one again!

Errr. paint.net is really simple and I do mean "simple". Dont expect much on blending capability and stuff unless u know how to control the opacity. Btw, it doesnt have a hardness option so u will only get 100% all the time. Lets just say its a more advance ms paint with layer and opacity function. that's all.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 4 2009, 05:56 PM

wow nice one. Liked the girl best. Really should think of coloring it.

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This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 18 2009, 12:07 AM

im sensing.......Narutardness.

You r right. But let me add something. There's a problem in perspective. That is the idea of "the further the thing, the smaller the thing gets from viewer perspective". Looking at the right fist, seem to be the same size as the left fist. Also, is it me or is the right hand only have 3 fingers. Also the body a bit.........like a board (or cockroach) ? Anyway need some work on the body as well.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 20 2009, 06:15 PM

It looks stiff cause the colour and body draw are a bit blocky. Need more details into it. Example would be the hair, try to make to make more hair strands stand out. It looks to me like a white paper, cut out and paste it to his head. Also, need some muscle lining on his arm and leg so that they dont look too plain solid.

Probably its already good that not many people want to criticize much. Frankly, I only find joy in becoming Simon Cowell. Some of my arts also not much comments at all (aside from comments telling me to fix this and that)...... so I assume this is good sign, no ?

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 21 2009, 04:50 PM

Hav u actually seen an anime/manga where a guy look like a girl and vice versa? Dont think urs is like that though....maybe there is a bit of a hint but I thought its just the way it is.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 21 2009, 05:06 PM

Good concept but can still improve a bit. Like the hair lining. The hair (especially the obvious 3 blue streak of hairs at the upper right) looks as if they are on gel.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Apr 22 2009, 12:05 AM

@Agito

Cant comment at the moment cause the deviant site is blocked. Hav to wait till i get back

@Aizen

Rather good ones there. There are mood to it on how u use the colour.