QUOTE(neo_lam @ Apr 22 2010, 03:39 PM)
u got your very own style...but some got messy background...try some other angle and perspective..
thanks. i usually take only take one random at stuff, i'll try take multiple shot at different angle next time.
QUOTE(MechaHerc @ Apr 22 2010, 03:43 PM)
welcome to orange naimadam..
its very helpful if u put number at ur pic
i like the traffic light n bowl photo there.. but u need to learn abit about composition..
the traffic lite is chop at the top a bit n a little underexposure. the bowl is too slanting, RO3 is gud there
thanks for the welcome.
i think i'll improve in time. now i know what im missing.
and what is 'RO3' ? im still new to this.
Added on April 22, 2010, 4:07 pmQUOTE(likito @ Apr 22 2010, 03:49 PM)
no post processing ?left bottom picture lower ur angle down ,or zoom in a bit . i think will be better
ya, i photshop it a little bit. im new to this so my post processing skill is still messy, i think.
QUOTE(shootkk @ Apr 22 2010, 03:54 PM)
naimadam : I think you're shooting too fast! Meaning you're too eager to hit that shutter button. Since you are new to this, I guess it's normal for that. Hehehe...
Going clockwise from top left:
First pic:
Watch your cropping. You cropped off a bit from the top of the traffic lights. The Astro dish? on the bottom and the lamp post is a bit distracting.
Second pic:
Ok but would have been better if the bowls are a bit more exposed. And I would have straightened the horizon.
Third pic:
Don't quite get what you're trying to show. If you had gone lower and got the chair leg on the left side of the frame out and showed just the other chair legs plus the person's leg then it would have some contrast as all the legs are blue except for one red colored one. Just my 2 cents lar...
Fourth pic:
Get closer! Try filling up about a third of the frame with the dead leaf.
okay okay, i get what you try to say.
i'll be more patient next time.
i appreciate your review, thanks.
This post has been edited by naimadam: Apr 22 2010, 04:07 PM