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naimadam
post Apr 22 2010, 03:36 PM

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Hey, i'm new to DSLR photography, need your opinion on some of my shot.

Here are some of my shot using A300 with SAL18250 lens.

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what do you guys think ?

naimadam
post Apr 22 2010, 04:00 PM

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QUOTE(neo_lam @ Apr 22 2010, 03:39 PM)
u got your very own style...but some got messy background...try some other angle and perspective..
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thanks. i usually take only take one random at stuff, i'll try take multiple shot at different angle next time.

QUOTE(MechaHerc @ Apr 22 2010, 03:43 PM)
welcome to orange naimadam..  biggrin.gif

its very helpful if u put number at ur pic

i like the traffic light n bowl photo there.. but u need to learn abit about composition..

the traffic lite is chop at the top a bit n a little underexposure. the bowl is too slanting, RO3 is gud there
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thanks for the welcome. smile.gif
i think i'll improve in time. now i know what im missing.
and what is 'RO3' ? im still new to this.


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QUOTE(likito @ Apr 22 2010, 03:49 PM)
no post processing ?left bottom picture  lower ur angle down ,or zoom in a bit . i think will be better
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ya, i photshop it a little bit. im new to this so my post processing skill is still messy, i think.

QUOTE(shootkk @ Apr 22 2010, 03:54 PM)
naimadam : I think you're shooting too fast! Meaning you're too eager to hit that shutter button. Since you are new to this, I guess it's normal for that. Hehehe...

Going clockwise from top left:

First pic:
Watch your cropping. You cropped off a bit from the top of the traffic lights. The Astro dish? on the bottom and the lamp post is a bit distracting.

Second pic:
Ok but would have been better if the bowls are a bit more exposed. And I would have straightened the horizon.

Third pic:
Don't quite get what you're trying to show. If you had gone lower and got the chair leg on the left side of the frame out and showed just the other chair legs plus the person's leg then it would have some contrast as all the legs are blue except for one red colored one. Just my 2 cents lar...

Fourth pic:
Get closer! Try filling up about a third of the frame with the dead leaf.
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okay okay, i get what you try to say.
i'll be more patient next time.
i appreciate your review, thanks.

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naimadam
post Apr 22 2010, 04:44 PM

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QUOTE(Kul | Mo0 @ Apr 22 2010, 04:23 PM)
naimadam : The traffic light shot and the bowls shot would be nicer if the background is plain though. (: And speaking of new. Interested in getting a very sleek DSLR bag from me? XD
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might be interested with the bag since i dont even have sony dslr bag. i use nikon bag for my A300 blush.gif
can the bag fit my a300 + battery grip and SAL18250 ?

QUOTE(Banzai_san @ Apr 22 2010, 04:26 PM)
welcome to the Orange League...  rclxms.gif
Dont forget to PM bro amadeo to add you in the A300 owner's list  smile.gif

I like the vibrant colors of the photos of the chairs...  rclxms.gif
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thanks for the welcome. smile.gif

QUOTE(kev da man @ Apr 22 2010, 04:31 PM)
naimadam: woi apa 'up baju kurung' nih! laugh.gif
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that photo was taken when i wait for my turn to get my anugerah pelajar cemerlang at my school.
getting so bored waiting so i decided to take the shot. tongue.gif
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post Apr 22 2010, 05:29 PM

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QUOTE(ReasonsofThanatos @ Apr 22 2010, 04:43 PM)
naimadam welcome to d orange legion thumbup.gif
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thanks for the welcome icon_rolleyes.gif

QUOTE(albnok @ Apr 22 2010, 04:51 PM)
naimadam: I LOVE the color in the traffic light shot. I've never seen such shiny traffic lights! Of course, you could get a cleaner shot of it. The bowl one I like because it has highlights around its edges, but you could align the table it is on.

The leaf shot, if you didn't put all 4 pictures together, would stand out more. Shoe shot doesn't appeal to me.
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ive get what your saying.
thanks for the feedback

QUOTE(kev da man @ Apr 22 2010, 04:56 PM)
hahaa, here's how to make your leaf image more interesting;
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wooahh, your right that is more interesting. rclxms.gif
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post May 7 2010, 03:17 PM

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QUOTE(eddybeh @ May 7 2010, 02:58 PM)
hey guys. i've got thispromotion. any1 planning to go?
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