Welcome Guest ( Log In | Register )

Outline · [ Standard ] · Linear+

 ::: Art Attack ::: V2

views
     
Agito666
post Aug 25 2011, 05:14 PM

10k Club
Group Icon
Elite
11,861 posts

Joined: Oct 2008
From: Bangalasia
QUOTE(Adamiquesce @ Aug 25 2011, 05:08 PM)
No need read theory or whatever,u can see it for urself if any flaw that make the character looks deformed.
*
it is more like law of anime, if you break it it really looks awkward.

Attached Image
something like that... usually must apply on standing pose. hmm.gif
which i previously did it wrong.
SUSAdamiquesce
post Aug 25 2011, 05:46 PM

Perlu ada Soul
*****
Senior Member
711 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Soulport
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 25 2011, 05:14 PM)
it is more like law of anime, if you break it it really looks awkward.

Attached Image
something like that... usually must apply on standing pose. hmm.gif
which i previously did it wrong.
*
Law of anime,lol,not just anime,u should apply it on every humanoid drawings.
Agito666
post Aug 25 2011, 05:48 PM

10k Club
Group Icon
Elite
11,861 posts

Joined: Oct 2008
From: Bangalasia
QUOTE(Adamiquesce @ Aug 25 2011, 05:46 PM)
Law of anime,lol,not just anime,u should apply it on every humanoid drawings.
*
ya forget doh.gif
anime basically just a style of deformed drawing, or simplify in some way. tongue.gif
SUSAdamiquesce
post Aug 25 2011, 05:54 PM

Perlu ada Soul
*****
Senior Member
711 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Soulport
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 25 2011, 05:48 PM)
ya forget doh.gif
anime basically just a style of deformed drawing, or simplify in some way. tongue.gif
*
Deformed in a good way and exaggerated,they look acceptable because their body is balanced and we can relate.Ur drawing just now has flaw on body proportion and the pose,try to apply what did I just informed you.
Agito666
post Aug 25 2011, 05:56 PM

10k Club
Group Icon
Elite
11,861 posts

Joined: Oct 2008
From: Bangalasia
Attached Image

update my cockpit. tongue.gif

^ya read that, will do it when my mind is more clearer XD
SUSAdamiquesce
post Aug 25 2011, 06:00 PM

Perlu ada Soul
*****
Senior Member
711 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Soulport
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 25 2011, 05:56 PM)
» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «


update my cockpit. tongue.gif

^ya read that, will do it when my mind is more clearer XD
*
Good details.
H4XF4XTOR
post Aug 25 2011, 06:16 PM

【ツ】PANDAMON 【ツ】
*******
Senior Member
3,081 posts

Joined: May 2011
From: ▁ ▂ ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ █ 100 %



arghh..maybe ill take some time to draw later ....

quite detail there your gundam... pretty much effort tongue.gif

Agito666
post Aug 26 2011, 02:56 PM

10k Club
Group Icon
Elite
11,861 posts

Joined: Oct 2008
From: Bangalasia
» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «

sayaka miki (updated)

» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «

kyoko sakura

all are fan art of anime: Puella Magi Madoka Magika .now completing fixing 3 of 5.
SUSAdamiquesce
post Aug 26 2011, 04:24 PM

Perlu ada Soul
*****
Senior Member
711 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Soulport
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 26 2011, 02:56 PM)
» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «

sayaka miki (updated)
Her legs,pay attention to the legs,right hand also.
That Kyoko Sakura is great.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Aug 26 2011, 04:28 PM
Agito666
post Aug 26 2011, 04:33 PM

10k Club
Group Icon
Elite
11,861 posts

Joined: Oct 2008
From: Bangalasia
QUOTE(Adamiquesce @ Aug 26 2011, 04:24 PM)
Her legs,pay attention to the legs,right hand also.
That Kyoko Sakura is great.
*
still duno unsure.gif
you draw in other colour and point it out la. hmm.gif

and ya your signature is overboard. exceed 15 lines

read the signature FAQ. smile.gif

---

it is not i m oppose you or anything, just you keep saying there is something wrong and i asked other and it seems they didn't feel anything weird.
so ya, if can draw a simple one and point out for me. smile.gif

This post has been edited by Agito666: Aug 26 2011, 05:35 PM
XPAWNED01
post Aug 26 2011, 07:02 PM

Casual
***
Junior Member
307 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Somewhere in KL
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 26 2011, 04:33 PM)
still duno  unsure.gif
you draw in other colour and point it out la.  hmm.gif

and ya your signature is overboard. exceed 15 lines

read the signature FAQ.  smile.gif

---

it is not i m oppose you or anything, just you keep saying there is something wrong and i asked other and it seems they didn't feel anything weird.
so ya, if can draw a simple one and point out for me. smile.gif
*
Actually the Sayaka Miki's leg kinda weird to me too. I noticed that her thighs are too long.

This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Aug 26 2011, 07:02 PM
PeakedCaps
post Aug 26 2011, 07:08 PM

New Member
*
Junior Member
9 posts

Joined: Aug 2011
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 26 2011, 04:33 PM)
still duno  unsure.gif
you draw in other colour and point it out la.  hmm.gif

and ya your signature is overboard. exceed 15 lines

read the signature FAQ.  smile.gif

---

it is not i m oppose you or anything, just you keep saying there is something wrong and i asked other and it seems they didn't feel anything weird.
so ya, if can draw a simple one and point out for me. smile.gif
*
Don't know if correct. My anatomy is out of whack sometimes as shown previously... It LOOKS a little top long/heavy. But after a while it looks okay I suppose.

Something like this maybe. blush.gif
» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «


Agito666
post Aug 26 2011, 07:20 PM

10k Club
Group Icon
Elite
11,861 posts

Joined: Oct 2008
From: Bangalasia
QUOTE
The thigh needs to come up more and leg a bit more forward.
If that leg were to be straightened then it would be way longer. See it? The left leg bent like that would have the thigh more up/forward.


lol seems like i got 2 really huge different gap feedback here XD
H4XF4XTOR
post Aug 26 2011, 08:27 PM

【ツ】PANDAMON 【ツ】
*******
Senior Member
3,081 posts

Joined: May 2011
From: ▁ ▂ ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ █ 100 %



IM balik kampung..hopefully have some time to draw.... biggrin.gif
SUSAdamiquesce
post Aug 26 2011, 09:00 PM

Perlu ada Soul
*****
Senior Member
711 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Soulport
QUOTE(Agito666 @ Aug 26 2011, 04:33 PM)
still duno  unsure.gif
you draw in other colour and point it out la.  hmm.gif

and ya your signature is overboard. exceed 15 lines

read the signature FAQ.  smile.gif

---

it is not i m oppose you or anything, just you keep saying there is something wrong and i asked other and it seems they didn't feel anything weird.
so ya, if can draw a simple one and point out for me. smile.gif
*
Okay,but later,Im lazy la to do now.
Lol the sig,I actually counted it,but I forgot about the pic doh.gif
sam5941
post Aug 27 2011, 03:39 PM

Getting Started
**
Junior Member
145 posts

Joined: Nov 2007
wow,all sifu here with beautiful skill!
SUSAdamiquesce
post Aug 27 2011, 06:24 PM

Perlu ada Soul
*****
Senior Member
711 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Soulport
» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «

Sorry,I want to fix more,but using mouse is hard,I want a tablet right now... cry.gif
U need to fix more on the right hand and the feet,they need to be bigger.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Aug 27 2011, 06:25 PM
DaddyO
post Aug 27 2011, 09:57 PM

Regular
******
Senior Member
1,255 posts

Joined: Aug 2011
QUOTE(Adamiquesce @ Aug 27 2011, 06:24 PM)
» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «

Sorry,I want to fix more,but using mouse is hard,I want a tablet right now... cry.gif
U need to fix more on the right hand and the feet,they need to be bigger.
*
What you should be fixing is her feet size not length.

This post has been edited by DaddyO: Aug 27 2011, 11:04 PM
Sai91
post Aug 27 2011, 10:21 PM

Schizodroid™
******
Senior Member
1,023 posts

Joined: May 2010
should i send my undone mecha head? LOL
lazy to continue due busy with work D:
XPAWNED01
post Aug 27 2011, 10:22 PM

Casual
***
Junior Member
307 posts

Joined: Jul 2011
From: Somewhere in KL
QUOTE(DaddyO @ Aug 27 2011, 09:57 PM)
What you should be fixing is her feet size not length.
*
Actually most of the legs part have flaws. The length of the thighs and the feet size.
(Well, in my eyes though)

125 Pages « < 122 123 124 125 >Top
 

Change to:
| Lo-Fi Version
0.0189sec    0.59    6 queries    GZIP Disabled
Time is now: 26th November 2025 - 01:36 PM