line can be cleaner.

i see this 30 min ago so i had to draw her

my version of her   



i just winged this,
dint color her eye and dint do a proper shading,
im not going to steal anyone art so i leave her like this   

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torso ya i did it wrong, because i lazy brain so i draw previous one, i mean hand la... when you twist the body your hand should at where?

legs seems too thin? lower part one?
and from this angle actually it is dangerous because it does looks "FAT" for this.
usually people will add a cloth link to make it clear. eg: you refer the drawing i did, if you erase that line you will feel fat.

but @peakedcaps one seriously more weirder...

http://kandoken.deviantart.com/art/Juri-ha...ssion-222832760

how about this waist? 

but i like this one 

really like how he sketch the muscle and rib cage.

still duno 
you draw in other colour and point it out la. 

and ya your signature is overboard. exceed 15 lines

read the signature FAQ. 

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it is not i m oppose you or anything, just you keep saying there is something wrong and i asked other and it seems they didn't feel anything weird.
so ya, if can draw a simple one and point out for me.