mann..i lose my file..cant rendering it

That's where the anatomical problem is. Frankly, unless she's a gymnast and/or double jointed, she can't twist the body to that extent. You can feel this yourself: lie down on a flat surface (bed or floor, doesn't matter), on your back, with your chest facing the ceiling. Then, making sure your shoulders remain touching the flat surface, twist your lower body (legs and hips) to one side.

You'll find that you can't really turn your torso and lower body to more than a 90-degree or right angle turn to each other (that is, your chest/torso facing the ceiling, your hips twisted to the side). Unless of course, as I mentioned, you're extraordinarily flexible. Even then, not more than a 120-degree angle. Any more, you risk snapping your spine. >.<

Anyway, point I'm trying to make is that considering the angle of her butt, you should only be able to see the side of her body. Certainly not both her breasts at the same time!

Not my tutorial, but the angle illustrated in this manga drawing tutorial fits closely enough to your sketch, with just some slight differences (the character in the pic has her arms facing forward)

Female perspective tutorial, by legendra on deviantArt

I see. Thanks. I'll try to fix it again.
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I fixed it. How is it? Ok or still a no-no?



This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Aug 17 2011, 07:51 AM

something like that , i m not good either

kaki got problem i think..
what's with the misai?

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Added on August 17, 2011, 11:19 amanother cincai one by me.



This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Aug 17 2011, 11:19 AM

that is for your reference for the waist la =x
misai? sexy mah.
leg i see no problem.

quite hard isnt it to get it right.. the possible thing is to get infront mirror and see how the body posture look
lol.. moustache..hahahahahha

actually i found kinda awkward of the pose haha... the hand i should change to other direction.

it looked ok to me

try to re sketch it, i guess twisted body dint work for me

the third figure almost make it...

i duno right or wrong

you know what,i myself trying to mimic that postures but i think you cant really rotate your torso to that extent.. i dont know... seems dont right... maybe ill try to draw it tonight

torso ya i did it wrong, because i lazy brain so i draw previous one, i mean hand la... when you twist the body your hand should at where?

I think only the lower right arm is a bit short for XPAWNED01's pic and maybe the hips a little wider? But what do I know cause just so happen I also wanted similar advice...



Line art cleaner this time? It doesn't feel pencil drawn though somehow.

legs seems too thin? lower part one?
and from this angle actually it is dangerous because it does looks "FAT" for this.
usually people will add a cloth link to make it clear. eg: you refer the drawing i did, if you erase that line you will feel fat.

Yeah, I kept redoing the legs but somehow... I think I'll make it a more normal stance then. What's a cloth link? As in draw "behind the scenes"?

link pula
i typo... is Line. cloth line. sewing line...like normal t-shirt la. got a line at the armpit there.

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nah give you comment this, i know got awkward but i duno where to fix.

leg should be bigger,the thigh

wow... so many people correcting my drawing..
thanks...

because its weird and somehow challenging..rotating that torso to that extent