i still new to sai so nt sure how to control yet...currently only noe how to use brush n other to paint n control the pressure to make the line more nicer only...

not much on the position but in my eyes..the shape and the hair...

ouh well keep practice yarr
anyway

sketch up..i dunno if this right topic i should post

and this one really old..its like form 2 and first time draw

A suggestion: Try drawing a "skeleton" outline of the character using very light pencil/pixel strokes, before you actually put in the inked lineart.

In your original piece, the actual outline of the "skull" is too small in proportion to the body. The hair gives the illusion of it being the right size, but in fact the way you drew the hair, it rests on top of the head like an oversized wig.

wow..sketch up..its been a while since i touched those...
have you tried rendering it

nice sketch btw

a quick sketch with mouse just now

i modified and fixed a bit. Is this ok or still the same?

@ XPAWNED01

hmmm... there's some anatomical/proportion problems still. I'd draw up a quick guide for anatomy, but it's late and I have work tomorrow Ah, the demands of a 9-to-6 job...

I'll probably write up something a bit more detailed tomorrow. Send me a PM, so I actually remember

you dont really need to, if the body proportion is the case. it's not like i started drawing yesterday.
Actually I wanna draw the girl with her body twisted a little bit. Maybe that's the problem I think.
Thanks for the advice anyway. I appreciate it.

thats it.... see,you can detect it on your own.....

lar.. that's the whole reason of what I am drawing that picture.
Wanted to make the girl body twisted a bit to make her like terkejut and toleh sikit kebelakang...

i tomorrow if i free a bit i sketch up for you, naked one

i dont mind. can post here meh?

this is art mah....

x kena ban post prawn gooding here meh..?

looking forward to it
but sure can or not

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Added on August 17, 2011, 2:26 amyou look at the title meh "Legit"

This post has been edited by H4XF4XTOR: Aug 17 2011, 02:27 AM

lol... inb4 me sudah lama x lukis hamsap pictures.. bertaubat sudah.
tapi still tgk hamsap picture.

me too.. i never did..but sexy2 one can lah

Just some of my manga draft/sketch using pencil.
I erased the dialogue for you all to imagine.
Kalau buruk tu biar je lah





This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Aug 17 2011, 02:52 AM

well,you reminded me back the when i was doing comics like this,with pensil ,pen.... maybe that monster can make the hand abit longer.
you know what, in matter of years,your stroke will change without you realizing it.. just keep drawing...
and find your own stroke

thanks man.
that comic above is my third title so far (walaupun not all title lukis sampai end story)
stroke.. i guess that's my stroke after drawing like 6 years.


This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Aug 17 2011, 03:17 AM