QUOTE(Pro3363 @ Oct 13 2013, 05:58 PM)
Please C&C... Still new into macro
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Great try man~
Good photo there

I think it has all the elements of a good macro shot, apart from the out-of-focus part as what
silverfire sifu has mentioned

Its nice to have bokeh in both foregrounds and backgrounds (Not only for macro shots)

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I think the trick to this photo (if you still want to frame it like this), is to know which area of the subject to be put in focus; in this case its the shell, rather than the snail's stalk eyes

That's because the shell is much larger, imho its better to keep it in focus.
However, for other normal insects etc., usually people love to focus on the eyes~