Below Animesan song "CrawlingTheHeaven" after I made adjustment on the volume & end part.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SI5ZQM99

Animesan
Care to tell which part do you think its out of note?

tanton82
Thank you. I haven't getting proper train on playing so basically I not really know how advice others player. Anyway base on experience, everyone should practise using metronome as you already know and don't rush to play fast. Make sure play at certain clean & comfortable, don't cheat. If you cheat, you ruin your playing.


This post has been edited by Jemi: Dec 15 2005, 09:24 AM

i'll listen to it tonight
do you like to listen to your own solos by the way ? how would you criticize yourself ?

Jemi:

Great as usual!!!

some notes sound out of tune, but even Paul Gilbert has solos that sound 'a bit off'...

Whoa jemi, love your tone man!! its good stuff
Your playing is hellofagood as well!~ though some parts of your playing
seems to be fusion in a way?

Pix
Well, 'Yes' i like to hear at my own solo. Come on Pix, anyone like to hear at his own playing, espeacially when you reallize that our own playing already at certain level after all the hard work & frustrating. I means anyone dreaming to play like our guitar hero.

How do I critise my self? Err.. not sure how to answer this. For me to many things I can critise my own playing, the best way I think record & listen. At this time, I just make sure I enjoy with it, make sure all note, bending, vib, slide means anything that I wanna to put in place at the right pitch as planned(sometimes off abit..he..he.. can't avoid it still not Pro yet.) & the same time hope others enjoy it to (this one important to me).

ModD
Thank you very much. Not that great but Oklah..

z3r0l33t
Thanks. You think its nice tone? That good news to me, actually just found it month ago after tweaking my ZOOM GFx-8 here & there.

This post has been edited by Jemi: Dec 15 2005, 10:44 AM

jemi, that wasn't a tricky question.. i genuinely wonder if you (or anyone else) like to hear himself playing. I'm like you, when i record myself, i have a big grin on my face when i hear what i can play ... sometimes> But other times, i feel like i'm so sloppy

i re-listen to your song... i'm less enthousiastic than the 1st time : now that i can hear exactly your guitar. sometimes, you don't nail the note you 'should' (you know... you bend a note to reach one of the notes used in the next chord, or you end a run, or a legato, on such notes) i.e. 0:53. On the opposite, during your intro, you're nailing them perfectly !
And i'm happy because now i could hear the little flaws during your sweepings or alt. pickings. It makes it more human

Overall, you have great ideas to make your solo 'dynamic', your solo is constantly evolving in weird ways. That's your strength. And you have a melodic strength too, cuz you manage to show that you're trying to follow some kind of natural flow... (am i clear ?) But IMO, you have to work on that : be more lay-back during your slow phrases, in terms of tempo. Make it more soulful... and in the fast runs, try to reach those fjooking 'harmonic' notes
You have great potential, after only 4 or 5 years of playing, is it ? Amazing dude.. very mature.

i wonder you guys have any accoustic guitar song (self made )to introduce ar ?? ...hehe..all i heard is electric guitar wan ..

Will post up my break-up song soon.

@blackstrix

great to heard that..hope you post it asap..

I know you all have been waiting for it, and I appologize.... so in the mean time.... this is the very FIRST version of Stuck Here (All Alone) I did back in 2003. Will be doing the re-recording when I have the time. Please excuse the crappy vocals and guitar solo!!!!

EDIT: Here it is!
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FT3IN7Z8

This post has been edited by blacktrix: Dec 22 2005, 09:28 PM

whee!!! blacktrix !!!! XD
patience..... oh i dun have it XD =.=

blacktrix....u're the vocal?

not bad....very impressed with you~!

nvr know u can sing like that

whoa, blacktrix
i din know u cud sing like that man

I hated my vocals on that one......

shall we do a new virtual jam for the new year ? holidays will make everybody available... any backtrack available ? anyone, post one !

Maybe with a Xmas theme to it maybe??!

well, the rythm track can be anything, you can top up a xmas theme on any kind of track

to be honest...i'm quite enjoy your vocal.....coz it kinda 'powerful' while the chorus part.......anyway.....u've done a very good job.....thx for sharing...

been making it throughout this year (2005) after i crumbled down from a relationship, all either its picked or sturmming ;o acoustica-ism

ManMeng - Why
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Why
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20why.zip

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Running in circles, wondering that the world doesn't seem to turn in a correct manner. Wondering why that things happened in a way that it's never meant to be or written in books.
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ManMeng - Farn
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Farn (Chinese)
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20farn.zip

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Miscommunication and misunderstanding caused so many unfairness between friends, parents or lovers. It makes the world even harder to trust people around you when you seemingly see people playing with love for fun. There's even so many out there are hurt while they're not meant to be. Makes all of us questioned wheter the world has always turned in the correct direction? Or is it not a question? That you'll really able to find someone that willing to share their world with you throughfully. Who's going appear?
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ManMeng - November
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : November
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20november.zip

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Is there any point in your life where it rains whenever its November? When all of the memories that brings you back to where you have started. Sitting down alone in the room around this time may makes you wonder when you'll fall. The rain's outside with you that's inside.
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ManMeng - Breathe
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Breathe
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20breathe.zip

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It's November, and i thought to write some songs, not for only myself, and the person that i appreciate, but also to thank all my loving friends. Seriously, without you peoples, I ought to know when or where do I'll find another start in my life after some tragic end. And this song should make everyone believe that a bad past doesn't mean it's the end, but instead, it marks a new beginning of a better life! Because of the past, you'll able to have a clearer view and comparison to see and let you treasure how good you are in present now, or in the future.

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ManMeng - Moon
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Moon
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20moon.zip

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Have you ever trapped in a situation where trying is just
not enough, the more you climb and scream, the more you'll
fall, as if the things that is right to be done are not right
at all anymore? Where you have nowhere to hold on telling you
that what is right or wrong anymore. But somehow we'll learn
that there are thing's that will always left unanswered and
best even if it's not even mentioned. This is song is to question
all the stupidness that occurs in this world that no one dare
to doubt and question about it. Please leave your comment to
me at http://manmeng.blogspot.com/ or you can message me. Thanks again.

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ManMeng - Change
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Change
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20change.zip

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The world's changing, but so do the people, looking as people
around you come and go all the time. You sometimes bump into
people that you knew years before, but knowing that they does
not recognize you anymore.

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ManMeng - Thanks
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Thanks
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20thanks.zip

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Friends nowadays, are worth of a few 'clicks' on your
mouse clicks, like friendster, what type of 'friend' is
'friend' that you can find nowadays? Hello Bye Bye?. I
can't express how grateful I am afterall, to realize there
are still a small amount of friend which are worthy for my
respect and salute, and thus, i made this song solely for you.
My friend, thanks. If you like it, please send it to the friend
that you want to thank, or the one you love. thanks. Please
leave your comment to me at http://manmeng.blogspot.com or you
can message me. Thanks again.

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ManMeng - Room
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Room
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20room.zip

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What is the feeling of living, waking, facing
the challenges all alone in a restricted room, where
you have no air to breathe, no lights that shines in
for you. Sounds echoed all around you with yourself
talking to yourself, trying to ask for people to guide
you out from the darkness. It is afterall, does not sound
as that bad as I describe here, hope you enjoy this
piece of work of mine, like what i really do.
(p.s. - there's an alternate acoustic version for it)

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ManMeng - Untitled
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Untitled
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20untitled.zip

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The song's about memories at how thing started in
my life. Sparkled and brighten up like never
before. A little bit of happiness left inside me
that i wanted to let her know. Up until now, i
can't find a word to carve a word for this song,
because i was left speechless. And yes, it will be
rerecorded with my friends as a band soon.
Hopefully Hope you'll enjoy this song as much
as i do, the song in my life i ever composed. Cheers.
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ManMeng - People
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : People
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20people.zip
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The second song I've ever composed, i felt that
this expressed my inner thought of what my life
are to be, journeys with different people,
environment around, changing rapidly, which we may
never predict what's to come next, who come or who
go. It even feels weird when i think my life's
like an RPG game, with experience points to level
up myself, to reach different stages and levels.
but it is just weird, just weird. Hope you'll enjoy it.
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ManMeng - Ache
Lyrics Written by : ManMeng Ng
Music Composed by: ManMeng Ng
Singer : ManMeng Ng
Song Title : Ache
Copyright 2005 ManMeng.net
Download : http://www.oneduasan.com/manmeng%20-%20ache.zip
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Most emotional song I've ever written, deep within
myself, a pain that can't be described upon words.
Words and the melody just came out of my mind at
the middle of the night in a dark gloomy room of
mine. But it is something that I could dig it down
inside and bring it out from myself. A pain that
can't seem to be healed by anything. And yes, I've
determined that I'll even rerecord this song
again, with a band. Hope that you feel what I
feel, peace.