Jemi... what to say about you...
you're playing furious solos, they sound very "clean". Your whole playing is clean...
The sweepings ? Woaw... very impressive. A bit too much of them for my taste though

Actually, the ones at 1:05 are kicking in plenty of good freaking energy, but the ones at 1:18 don't fit in.
The "bluesy" parts (stratospheric bends, pentatonic licks, artificial/pinched harmonics) are really awesome, but slightly too "mechanical" and perfect.
The start noises sound like satch stuff, a little bit. Satch has a way to make those kinds of intro very "interesting", original and leading to something. Here it lacks that "leading to something" approach. I'm dreaming too of doing such purposeful intro, as the master does... but it's just too hard for me

Guitar sound is good in the beginning (very "old" satch), then the solo sound is typical from Jemi, Ssslayerr and friends... cold and sharp, ultra-compressed... pouuuuark.

The main disapointment comes from the overall balance : Bass and trebles are 15dB too loud, it's awful (cuz consequently, guitar is 15dB too low !!). I guess that's Animesan who is to blame here, but Jemi, you could have rectified that. Don't you feel like your solo is way too deep in the mix ? Or is it my hearphones ?? I don't think so : bass are so loud, they're saturating !
To end that very mean critic : there's no ending to the solo... it does finish at 1:32 correct ? You still stuck in a flashy alt. picking run on the low frets...
Well, your solo is already at "pro" level, you've got your style, the ideas, the crazyness, the technic... i'm totally blown away. That's why i'm doing such rough & raw critics : that's the only thing i can give you

you give me music, i'm giving you opinion... i'm such a looser

you rule !