QUOTE(SpecGen @ Feb 4 2009, 01:28 PM)
well to begin with i'm not really familiar with this forum, but from your replies i see it otherwise. see, I did modify the work, but I do quote their previous work, that alone justify my respect to its rightfully owner. If I make that work greater than the original, wouldn't that be more rude? See.. my emphasize was to correct something that I 'think' can be improved. but the way that you think that it's better to post my own work does not suggest it's going to be helpful to you given that I don't give any comment on my work either.
here i compile it once more again, so you can see the comparison yourself. again, i'm not boasting here.
first all, your anatomy, second your lighting, third your composition, fourth your skin tones and possible fifth, your storytelling (

LeechFever)

i kid about the fifth hahaha, but see... with just drawing i can simplify the long typing criticism, which I think can be more vague. If you are a practicing painter, you will always have to be aware with all the elements. and even with its in vaguely form, you can tell the other elements that you are missing.
I do post my work at cgtalk and dA. If you are curious enough pm me and I'll show you my sample of work, provide you respect my decision to remain anonymous.
That's the comment Im looking for. That clears out the vagueness. Btw, those are animes and some are not meant to be body proportion or else it wont be well....moe, lol

. Some clearly just initial sketches not really the complete work, lol. Some work, I got to admit I just simply made (cause dont have that much time to do the final tuning). Will do the final touchup if I can save enough to get a tablet or scanner. As for lighting, to quote what u said "I did that for only 15 minutes", so justified the result.
PS: Can do me one simple thing? Pls erase my Username from ur modified version. The one with the word "wet" on it.
This post has been edited by LeechFever: Feb 4 2009, 01:52 PM