1. next time upload bigger picture so i can look it clearly
2. as for the coment(s).... i try my best to fix it ...but not good enough la...
3. for the face... did you refer to Ben's work?
4. shoulder is not clear...
5. butt should be balance...the right side seems like drum stick...
6. the actual drawing actually isn't good enough yet.

This post has been edited by Agito666: May 26 2009, 11:37 AM

oh well, i can see you are using some graphic program (MS paint?) to erase the test pad paper line (?)
i think better get a pack of pure A4 paper to draw and concentrate the line quality.

as for bigger picture...err... i think it depend on your scanner setting. or maybe your image host setting there.
just remember we view the picture in browser is 100%.

oh well, before drawing you better sketch a "see-through skeleton " like that to help on body proportion drawing.

This post has been edited by Agito666: May 26 2009, 02:54 PM

i'm graduate soon. i'm from fcm 's fa.
tsubasa is going to gamma year. he's also in FA.

btw, you no need take alpha year course?

here is the newer version of our FYP. the older one is not working anymore.



This post has been edited by Agito666: May 27 2009, 02:49 AM

wow did you paint the girl? i think no need 3D model liao, already nice enough
well if can find 3d model then better la...bty, i'm sux in 3D too ....

so good...i ran out idea/ motive to draw....

now still finding job =_=

looks like m-16 for me

This post has been edited by Agito666: Jul 5 2009, 11:39 PM

wow...what is the series' named?

nope, is a character in Bleach manga/anime. He is in villain (?) side and has top 10 ranking.

i miss sculpture class...

if i have more clay...i wanted to try to make Gundam

i think the problem is hair flow gua...
that makes rear part of the head looks weird.

cheers

This post has been edited by Agito666: Aug 4 2009, 11:54 PM

i can see your 10 min effort, it give me 10 sec shock

2 recent works before i go to work in Sept 1st ... T_T
dunno next time will got some energy left to draw after working....






err... you can get a A4 paper pack to draw it.
scanline papers is not suitable to draw hehe...

For 2nd picture, I dunno you are lazy draw both arms, so u draw arm putting on her back
err...suggestion... Neck part i think can be thinner a bit.
**by the way , i can see REX at back...

3rd pic, ear i think can be bigger a bit.

that's all i can comment, or try draw different angle.

This post has been edited by Agito666: Aug 25 2009, 12:56 AM

which one?

first one is draw on A4 paper...then straight colour it on overlay layer >_<
lazy clean up....

pencil version here


second one full digital, done in Painter. rarely use PS because I dun like their panning system...but soon I'll forced to use it again because company is use Adobe product...

hmm...the guy's right wing is a devil (bat) or angel's (bird) wing?

i see many feathers drop then i assume that is angel's wing...then why angel's wing structure looks like bat wing?

you can go to KFC and order a chicken wing and eat it and observe the bone structure

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 13 2009, 11:49 AM

suggestion on devil's wing...
instead u wan show a wounded(actually not wound, is eaten ) devil wing, why don't add some wounded patagium (skin on the wing )?

and for the angel's wing, you can refer to digimon's angel type monster drawings...
i kinda love that kind of drawing , not too complicated and not too simple yet...

like what?

much more better, what happen with his right hand? izzit the chair handler too low?

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Added on September 15, 2009, 12:35 am

ahem...ahem...
ZE-BRA

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 15 2009, 12:35 AM

i think i mentioned very well, his right hand ma!....