......I give it an ok, I guess. Its a bit over the top for my taste.
well, actually not many people like Kamen Rider Decade's design... when decade starts, i also feel's sux but now feel ok edi... but still Kamen Rider Decade's market i think they aim for kids...so the design is quite bizarre...
theme is urban racer, but im not really sure what exactly urban is... urban=city life.. thats all i know about urban and pretty much from what i researched, most urban art is based on buildings >_< so there goes.. building in the middle...
and i dont think i delivered the message lol trying to connect racer with 'gear's.. which i think doesnt really work..
urban racer... = street racer? if like that, then i suggest use some racing street car,neon light, etc will be better... preety much like NFS underground or undercover like that....
Body proportion still a bit off. The "breast" should be a bit lower and not to shoulder height. Imagine a male's chest and "extrude" it horizontally. Should be around there. There're others as well that need fixing, especially the leg.....looks rubbery. So is the length and proportion of the arms and hands.
immediating Oh!Great muscle proportion.. i can see the leg is shorter..but lazy to erase it, cause will make whole paper got black mark..
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Kamen Rider fan fiction....based on references of Faiz (555) SIC figure to refer the body structure.
* i know right rider's left leg is a bit off... and thinking wanted inking of it, but since it draw on the pencil line, maybe that will make it more messy?
This post has been edited by Agito666: May 11 2009, 09:42 AM
conclusion : rare people draw the art = more like "art" more people draw / mass produce the art....= that isn't art! (just like anime, too popular lol...)
sorry dude but the 1st thing thats distracting me when i look at it is that the perspective of the motocycle is off. and the emphasis on the moto isn't strong enough
if i didnt see your statement i might thought you were trying to emphasis the focus on the girl more than every other elements in the drawing.
eh... O.O i know the motorcycle's head is off as for the girl...eh...i'm nothing to say
by the way...which faculty you at? FCM? FA? MI? beta year?
This post has been edited by Agito666: May 24 2009, 07:14 PM
ahaha not bad...seems you guys fyp works this batch are pretty solid quality this time around nice story no wonder the bmw guys damn excited cant wait for the showcase
i really liked the render and lighting
showcase in MMU already pass edi... u kena watch it at FA NIGHT outside MMU later (?) around end of June like that.... not sure open to outsider or not.
This post has been edited by Agito666: May 25 2009, 04:27 PM