heh make sure you credit animous

I am a boy/man/otoko.. its stated below my avatar lah..

Thanks for ur help leech.. but its just as Benny-T said. I'll fix that as soon as I learn how to do it.

Lol of course.

Btw just a bit comment. The ironman hand is a bit ...er feels like no power. Try to cramp his hand like he's take a big dump in the toilet.

Still love your work.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Nov 5 2008, 12:05 AM

heh yeah,when it comes to hands i kinda sucked at it
lol
thanks for the critics

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Added on November 6, 2008, 2:31 am

FIXED
pose ,fingers and add more intensity to the lightning

This post has been edited by Benny-T: Nov 6 2008, 02:31 AM

self portrait, a lil bit of caricature.


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Sweet! Keep it up!

Here are some of my old works to share. Not much. Welcome any criticism. In case anyone ask, this are all done with MS paint.


This post has been edited by LeechFever: Nov 6 2008, 09:58 PM

hmm....nver knew of this thread....

imma slowpoke...

so this is from mah hobby

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Added on November 6, 2008, 8:28 pmi like it...nice...

This post has been edited by bugpakoo: Nov 6 2008, 08:28 PM

Sorry leechfever to dissapoint you.. I didnt manage to do the smoke effect propely so I end up safe with only zoom blur instead on the ground. Some tweak here and there after CnC at Animewallpaper forum and below is the end result.




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Art Attack!

cool!

damn you're good in vector
nice work mate

Hmmm not much of a difference from previous one. I suggest you keep working on the smoke effect though, up to you. Cause the scene is in a desert. If you swing your sword wouldn't there be a sand dust following the path? Imagine in motion if the guy swing his sword and half way through, what would the sand smoke be at? Capture that image and translate it into your art. Still great work btw.

nope
to make it simplify
he just have to make little smoke for the impact
cause if he's swinging the sword he'd be dead
i assume it's a locked up situation
never really watch anime

Its more of like a full swing with the killing intent. Just as they are about to strike each other necks, both of them stopped at the last moment knowing that it could end in a stalemate. Also, they stare at each other for a mere seconds (based on the slow motion capture animation) before they retreat to original positions. Meaning there should still be some "dirt" flying around. This one is like, hey you move first..and the other is like..no you go first...kind of lockup scenario.

Anyway, it's up to the artist to decide but this is just my opinion as the "viewer". Again I quote "it's up to you". I'm not forcing or trying to be a smartass. I apologize if it sound.......like what you think it sound.

This post has been edited by LeechFever: Nov 7 2008, 05:27 PM

lol
no prob
heh
it's up to everyone's imagination
diff people see diff thing i suppose

haha its really good opinion from both of you~ ya I guess leechfever has watch the scene so yes there should be some smoke/dust there but as my skill level are pretty low I cant manage to make it right. If you notice my drawing has a feeling of "Keras". it is pretty obvious in my previous work.. and you know if you try to apply your new learned skill on your hard-effort artwork you will see how it will going to be somehow errgh.. at least in my case.. haha


btw I'll try to applied smoke effect on my next artwork.. which I would like draw a scenery of cooking barbeque probably on picnic. It still early idea though but I'll make sure I'll applied the effect.

somehow i decided to do it anyway.. so here it is..


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sweet
nice work

Hmmm Better.

okeh! its time for me to study then~ aah not read anything yet 14 hours left to read..