QUOTE(Just Visiting By @ Sep 22 2014, 11:06 PM)
No, but I think they are very close.
Kesan buruk is a subset of masalah I guess.
Masalah means 'complications/problems" while kesan buruk means "negative impacts".
Can you give some examples you have problems with? haha
Just Visiting ByExample 1:
Perdagangan secara talian kini merupakan satu mekanisme baharu dalam urus niaga tanpa sempadan. Banyak kesan yang mungkin timbul akibat urus niaga melalui sistem elektronik ini. Bincangkan.There are kesan baik and buruk, but im mentioning the kesan buruk only:
1. Berlaku penipuan dan penyelewengan
2. Produk yang dibeli tidak sama kualitinya
3. Gangguan dalam talian
4. Wujud persaingan yang hebat antara syarikat tempatan dan syarikat antarabangsa
If the question is asking masalah yang dihadapi:
1. Perkhidmatan tidak menyeluruh
Can I relate the 4 kesan buruk with masalah? My teacher said that it cannot be accepted if it is elaborated elseway.
Then, how to elaborate so that the isi shows 'kesan buruk' or 'masalah'?
Example 2:
Mengikut Laporan UNESCO, sejak tahun 1970-an, bekalan air bersih dunia didapati semakin berkurangan. Keadaan ini boleh menimbulkan beberapa masalah kepada manusia dan alam sekitar. Bincangkan.
So how to identify the 'kata kunci' of the essay question and what is the answer combination?
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If your answer is only masalah kekurangan air bersih kepada manusia dan alam sekitar and your combo is 5+0, you are WRONG. My teacher told me that the kata kunci is 'Sebab bekalan air bersih semakin kurang' and 'Masalah kekurangan sumber air bersih kepada manusia dan alam sekitar' and the combo is 3+2 or 2+3
I was thinking: When we know that the first sentence of the question will give us a clue on kata kunci soalan and when the first sentence is just a description and can be ignored?
And I screwed badly for this essay and ALL MY POINTS ARE CONSIDERED 'TIDAK RELEVAN'.
My isi (only masalah):
1. Kesihatan manusia terjejas
2. Bekalan makanan manusia berkurang
3. Keadaan dunia menjadi huru-hara
4. Berlaku ketidakseimbangan ekosistem
5. Hidupan akuatik diancam
Can you tell me why these points are TOTALLY NOT RELEVANT with the question given?
This post has been edited by scgoh123: Sep 23 2014, 04:25 PM