Relax lah headhunter7. This time make brutal abit. He..he..

Who the hell is FIR??

I'll probably do a Good Charlotte song next..... just do cookie monster vocals on it.........

HH7, sorry, i didn't listen to it yet... i'm planning too, dun worry with Jemi's comments, it's just not very attractive, that's all

HH7, just listened to the song finally...
Jemi has been really nice to you actually

Your guitar is not tuned !!! there are dissonances everywhere... com'on, respect your listeners and do songs with a perfectly tuned guitar... where a E is a E and so on...

The solo is a bit out most of the time also, but I can't say if it's because of the bad tuning or a wrong choice of scale..

Good thing : I would have liked the arpeggios main theme, if it wasn't for the tuning. I usually like those moving chords on static melody, very efficient and catchy.

^ agreed on pix there. at least make sure the rythm part is nicely executed.

don't take this wrong but those are my humble opinion as a listener. i envisaged that was done in only one take, was it?

headhunter7

I owned an 'acoustic guitar' as a present from my father, at that time i was 12 years old (Did you notice my acoustic guitar?) Yeah 17 years old 'acoustic guitar'... It's still in good shape but poor contructions. The fret, bridge, saddle, nut all not align. That guitar almost have the same sound as yoursr. So, i guess maybe you facing the same situation as me.

If not, you should start learn to tune your own guitar. Its good for you, to improve your playing you should play in perfect tune.

yo headhunter7, just listened to your song, and i must agree with jemi, though his comments are harsh but its true actually..your tuning of the guitar is definitely out(i know you've heard this comment loads of times, but its best for now to stress on this part for the meantime)..even so, your song is good i must say( if not for the tuning that is ) the solo you did near the end was cool,with a matching progression and correct feel to say the least. overall, bad tuning, but nice song. keep up the good work!

ps: at least you can write a good song..i cant write nuts for now

This post has been edited by z3r0l33t: Jan 19 2006, 06:50 PM

Hey z3r0l33t, still owe you a beer for informing me about the Camo bullseye offer man.....

^ i thought it was noisetrigger who started it all...

I wasn't able to tune perfectly cuz I didnt have my tuner with me at that time..
Okay push aside the tuning, If the tuning perfect, how was the song?

This post has been edited by headhunter7: Jan 19 2006, 07:59 PM

Oh yeah..... My mind's a blur....... hit the three Ds when I broke up....
Depression, Detatchment, Drunkeness......

hahah yo blacktrix, dunno what i did, but yeah i do think i NEED to spend YOU a beer to try out your camo take a chill pill man, and relax...ping yourself to death with eternal ping-ing

Well look at the bright side, after D comes the E!

yeah man! its good that the next is E,especially if its the beautiful key of E major!!

But nothing beats a brand new Epihpone.

I just wikipedia'd FIR.....
I thought I made it clear......... bubble-gum pop I can handle..... Canto-pop or Canto-Rock..... urggggghhhhh......

are we spamming in this thread too ? tttt....
- blacktrix, go cry in cupid's corner
- led zep, go make them laugh in jokes heaven
- zeroleet, go buy beers to other guys in events and outings

But leave this thread clean

well its epiphone!! and FIR songs arnt bad.. its not canto.. its mandarin!! i dont understand them but its good music... good guitarist

Oh and actually I was playing the song using my electric

Speaking of Canton rock, anybody here a fan of Beyond??? I have their live DVD and they're amazing musicians. Too bad Ka Kui isn't here anymore.

Oh wait, we're supposed to leave this topic clean? Sorry, can't help it.