New Portrait album, taken at Hailam Village (around port klang area) under cloudy & raining condition.

Ready to received any critics, comments & feedback from you all.

More photos can be found on my Facebook Album: https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.2...96621975&type=1

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My previous shared photos album:

http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/2218687 - Pretty Cowgirl
http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/2225847 - Miss Leapord
http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/2248334 - Cool Looking Girl

Thanks for viewing ~

7# is the best

1# suggest to crop the right bottom thing, will look better

4# the line is disturbing

model quite good looking, not bad!

very fansoption kaler, u try follow his signature n watermark, we sure cant tell a different

I like the color tone!

Thanks of your feedback, Ask_Yip Sifu

7# thank you very much
1#: i think the bottom things are construction steels, included it might at more interest for the photo. But after all, from your advice, simple is better :-)
4#: that line is Boat steel wire. Next time will be careful on similar situation.

haha, saw some fansoption previous landscape @ travel album, really like his edited old film style color, but i still dunno how to create it. I am used my signature @ watermark (just simple copyright icon with my own name) since last year, Fansoption one is much better than my (he got his own trademark logo)

After all, still can tell the differ from the color tone editing (might need a good quality monitor/screen to view it, fansoption is better).


Thanks, Jing-leBelle. Now trying some different color tone on photo editing.

Going overboard with the HDR?

need to be careful about the alignment. for example #1.

#2 has some distracting stuff on top.

#3 too much reflection but I suppose it has its merits too, showing her looking at the sea.

#4 something wrong with the right side of the photo.

#5 quite nice but chopped off hand! urgghhhh.

#6 is model pose problem. background right smack behind her, not good.

#7 I like this photo but slightly chopped fingers, photo looks tilted due to the bottom wood frame. I think a tigher crop with better expression would look good.

#8 donno what's on the right side but I think a tighter crop would look better too.

#9 I like this one, I think if there's eye-contact and lights reflecting to you, it'll look superb.

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Added on April 6, 2012, 5:16 pmer, does this even look like HDR to you?

er.....make-up....(eyeline) reduce a bit ....

no idea on HDR portrait >_<

#1 Try some little tilt angle for photo shoot, seem not nice?
P/S: saw some anime cosplay photo shooting character, some photographer like to take tilt angle shot, really give positive impact

#2 do you mean the house wires at the back? lolz, next time want to learn how to remove it from photo editing.

#3 had used polarize filter to minimize the reflection effect, otherwise cannot see the model face >_<

#4 purposely do the effect, see how is the overall picture outcome (might not good enough since 1st time doing it, need more practice)

#5 ah... ... don't intend to chopped her hand off... is my bad composition & framing... (need practice on cropping photo skill)

#6 oh~ she still a newbie can't blame her, only can blame myself not guide her well.

#7 my bad composition >_<

#8 that one is "tiang besi". Noted, next time will more careful on similar photo shoot situation.

#9 Thanks goldfries, i got similar photo with eye-contact in differ angle shot

lolz, maybe she like it or make herself more attactive

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This post has been edited by KhaiYen: Apr 11 2012, 12:26 PM

nice shots
love the tone!

Thanks Michael
i am also wait your new photos upload at LY forum.