Welcome Guest ( Log In | Register )

Bump Topic Topic Closed RSS Feed

Outline · [ Standard ] · Linear+

 Cool Looking Girl, Noob indoor portrait

views
     
TSKhaiYen
post Mar 1 2012, 07:47 PM, updated 14y ago

New Member
*
Junior Member
9 posts

Joined: Jan 2012


Try some new photo editing technique for this indoor portrait shoot.

Ready to received any critics, comments & feedback from you all. sweat.gif sweat.gif sweat.gif

More photos can be found on my Facebook Album: https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.2...96621975&type=1

1#
user posted image

2#
user posted image

3#
user posted image

4#
user posted image

5#
user posted image


My previous shared photos album:
http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/2218687 - Pretty Cowgirl
http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/2225847 - Miss Leapord

If you like these photos,kindly to like my Facebook page as well. blush.gif

Thanks for viewing ~ smile.gif

P/S: Seem weird to me for the Topic Title, any better idea for it? rolleyes.gif
Ask_Yip
post Mar 2 2012, 11:28 AM

Retired Audiophiles
*******
Senior Member
2,864 posts

Joined: Feb 2011
From: NoWhere
Hmmm... something is missing...

No eye contact between the subject and the photographer perhaps?
alcohol
post Mar 2 2012, 11:56 AM

Getting Started
**
Junior Member
57 posts

Joined: Dec 2009
my two cents.. think the props are spoiling the picture..

you've got a great model, fantastic white background.. and blue dress.
the setting is at a very cool tone of colours.. then u put those horrible red/yellow/green legos in... just doesn't match the entire setting.

when u take a photo, u'll want the audience to concentrate on your subject but with you putting contrasting colours in it (the lego)... it just pull the attention away.

I think your pics will look much better without them.

Thats my opinion but feel free to disagree with me smile.gif
Hexlord
post Mar 4 2012, 08:43 AM

Enthusiast
*****
Junior Member
991 posts

Joined: Feb 2006
From: Kuala Lumpur


It's a unique style, I like it.

Although that's a good guideline (eye contact is impt, etc) it is not a rule set in stone.

The posing on #1 could use some work though, she doesn't look that comfy haha.
TSKhaiYen
post Mar 4 2012, 03:30 PM

New Member
*
Junior Member
9 posts

Joined: Jan 2012


QUOTE(Ask_Yip @ Mar 2 2012, 11:28 AM)
Hmmm... something is missing...

No eye contact between the subject and the photographer perhaps?
*
Ask_Yip, i am too shy with the model. blush.gif
By the way, want to try some shoot other than eye contact photos only.
Got ah, 1# photo and plus this one.

6#
user posted image

QUOTE(alcohol @ Mar 2 2012, 11:56 AM)
my two cents.. think the props are spoiling the picture..

you've got a great model, fantastic white background.. and blue dress.
the setting is at a very cool tone of colours.. then u put those horrible red/yellow/green legos in... just doesn't match the entire setting.

when u take a photo, u'll want the audience to concentrate on your subject but with you putting contrasting colours in it (the lego)... it just pull the attention away.

I think your pics will look much better without them.

Thats my opinion but feel free to disagree with me smile.gif
*
Thanks of your good intention and comment, alcohol.
Truly appreciate your feedback. smile.gif

The main reason they put the colorful Legos is because feel too plain for the shoots.
Next time will be more careful about it if face similar situation in future photo shoot.

QUOTE(Hexlord @ Mar 4 2012, 08:43 AM)
It's a unique style, I like it.

Although that's a good guideline (eye contact is impt, etc) it is not a rule set in stone.

The posing on #1 could use some work though, she doesn't look that comfy haha.
*
Thanks of your like, Hexlord.
Feel free to like my Facebook page as well, because i will update at FB before LY.
Thanks of your comment too. Maybe her leg posing is a bit weird tongue.gif
Ask_Yip
post Mar 5 2012, 08:48 AM

Retired Audiophiles
*******
Senior Member
2,864 posts

Joined: Feb 2011
From: NoWhere
Yeah, I like #6, can see the interaction between you and the model...
rx330
post Mar 5 2012, 10:39 AM

10k Club
********
All Stars
11,811 posts

Joined: Jun 2006
y the eyes look likes its phtochop to the model one on pic 6?
TSKhaiYen
post Mar 5 2012, 06:58 PM

New Member
*
Junior Member
9 posts

Joined: Jan 2012


QUOTE(Ask_Yip @ Mar 5 2012, 08:48 AM)
Yeah, I like #6, can see the interaction between you and the model...
*
Lolz~

QUOTE(rx330 @ Mar 5 2012, 10:39 AM)
y the eyes look likes its phtochop to the model one on pic 6?
*
i apply a bit sharpening around the eyes. I think is my pp skill failure. (apply too much) doh.gif
ADVedder
post Apr 7 2012, 10:01 PM

Getting Started
**
Junior Member
122 posts

Joined: Sep 2008
From: Dang Wangi District


Nice! Class by Afal rite?
TSKhaiYen
post Apr 11 2012, 12:05 PM

New Member
*
Junior Member
9 posts

Joined: Jan 2012


QUOTE(ADVedder @ Apr 7 2012, 10:01 PM)
Nice! Class by Afal rite?
*
yap, is Afal workshop, also his 1st workshop at KL biggrin.gif
etsuko
post Apr 17 2012, 10:33 PM

Spaced out person
Group Icon
Elite
4,210 posts

Joined: Jan 2003
From: Malaysia


#3 and #4 works best for me in terms of composure. I like how there's a purple-ish hue to all the pics.

And I agree with alcohol that in some of the pics, the lego stole more of the show.
alcohol
post Apr 18 2012, 01:52 PM

Getting Started
**
Junior Member
57 posts

Joined: Dec 2009
whos Afal?
ADVedder
post Apr 19 2012, 11:23 PM

Getting Started
**
Junior Member
122 posts

Joined: Sep 2008
From: Dang Wangi District


his work.. a friend of mine..
Afal LovePhotography
TSKhaiYen
post Apr 22 2012, 08:25 PM

New Member
*
Junior Member
9 posts

Joined: Jan 2012


QUOTE(ADVedder @ Apr 19 2012, 11:23 PM)
his work.. a friend of mine..
Afal LovePhotography
*
^^ really nice Malay Guy with really artistic mind, he also work & team up with other professional photographers.

Topic ClosedOptions
 

Change to:
| Lo-Fi Version
0.0200sec    1.15    5 queries    GZIP Disabled
Time is now: 23rd December 2025 - 07:54 AM