Same model on previous topic (http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/2218687), only with differ dress

Ready to received any critics, comments & feedback from you all.

More photos can be found on my Facebook Album: https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.2...96621975&type=1


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Thank you for viewing ~

#1 nicely framed!

BTW, she is too slim...

1st pic like the wood mau poke her head like tat
nice

^ i agree with rx330 about the poking wood haha

#3 is great, but u need to adjust the colour abit. too blueish i guess? for me la

#4 and #5 too much background at the top

nonetheless great lighting on the model. if only she... nvm

yeah yeah, like a scene from Final Destination or Omen! lol

#1 - what is that wood pointing at her for? REMOVE IT!!! Same applies to the one on the left.

#2 - awkward leg position and face. plenty of distractions. Lousiest shot from you so far.

#3 - hrm. ok. nothing special. feet touching frame me no like.

#4 - besides some minor distraction, I think this is 2nd best of the lot.

#5 - a tight frame of her face against the green background would be nice (but it becomes pic #1). no like the foreground.

#6 - awkward pose. She's tired ah? Also, shoe touching the bottom frame. Not good.

Good try nevertheless, still prefer your composition for the cowgirl theme.

somehow ... kinds of remind of wholleymolley.........
maybe same person?

wholleymolley is far behind lar...

Not too slim..too too skinny..no feel to piap piap..

Overall pictures are ok, but if you remove those distracting foreground & background objects (broken woods, big trees, chairs), then will be much better.

Some distracting foreground and background...

The model doesnt have a great body but she has a really really sexy face... exploit that (not in a bad way of course).

Thanks~
lolz, she is slim & tall

didn't realize about that...

pity for 1st picture
try a bit on blue/color photos, see how is the outcome. what do you think, is better to cancel the blueish?

i didn't realize the 1st picture become a fatal failure

Thanks Goldfires critical feedback & comment.
#1 - i thought put something into the picture instead of clean head photo, but turned not so great.
#2 - OMG, i am not good on composition...
#3 - now only realize her leg...
#4 - Thanks :>
#5 - her shoe touch on picture frame.Ah~,same mistake on picture #3

Next time will more careful on these distracting details on future photo shoot

Who is wholleymolley?



haha, maybe after she married, will become fatter

Thanks of your comment, kyo_kusanagi. I will more careful in the future.

Thanks of your feedback, Mikeshashimi.

you on drugs issit?

look at the quality laaaaa. WAY different.

even the response is different.

abang kentang, maybe i think too much, wahahhahaahah

but wholleymolley can get lessons from khaiyen, tats for sure

Different people with different photography style.
Maybe one day Wholleymolley will become pro instead only focus his small photography business.