Sorry but Im really curious,u can just PM me,PLEEAAASEEE,Im a teen stepping towards real life challenge!I reeeaaally need ur help!

wow...i feel sad seeing ur drawing n my drawing...
here is another drawing on saber lily...really nd to work on the hair...n face i think slightly too big...C&C welcome~



and below is few of the drawing i draw b4 i gt my tablet today...sry for bad picture quality...



This post has been edited by chinti: Sep 1 2011, 01:04 AM

that sakura... i draw a similar one before @_@" the one with mokona

U are good for a beginner who just started few weeks ago...I can see u become pro in future for a short time!

its on the cover of the anime...so i just draw it...@.@

thx..i really need to learn a lot from all of u here...will continue practice tmr..

i guess we are using the same references xD

Bump for today.
Yeah, the eyes look weird, and still my coloring not quite right..



Edited.

This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Sep 1 2011, 04:04 PM

I hold back to comment on this initially, but i have a suggestion... why dont you share in an open forum
what's your concern when moving up to a working life.

In this industry (arts & designs), there are many branches, then mebi those
who have experience in a branch that you are interested in, can give advise.

This post has been edited by 8difier: Sep 1 2011, 04:45 AM

dont have the link, that is few years ago stuff. that time i was randomly surfing and saw that.
anyway in the end , aside his bragging about the western people that keep asking " Y U NO GO BECOME ILLUSTRATOR", his point is drawing need more practice can be perfect.

i also need 1-2 weeks time to get use of it that time i purchase tablet... 5 years ago

need draw more, can see the shape there, but ya you know the face proportion and others is like err... "tersepah-sepah"...
need more tidy

skin tone can be use more fair colour.

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 1 2011, 07:06 AM

Are u working in those branches?
Alright,I get into topic now,sorry for interrupting guys.

need use more colour

This post has been edited by Sai91: Sep 1 2011, 11:58 AM

Does this look like one?

Not gonna finish the background.
Not sure about the shading though,any pro please comment.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 1 2011, 02:53 PM

this time i point back your leg...need wider?

Huh?Wider?Where?

edit: Ahh,that,dont mind lah,Im not even draw her feet,if I draw,sure I correct one lah.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 1 2011, 03:13 PM

quite close to juuhachigo, try fix the expression. 18 needs more 'garang' look.
Anyhow, I also agree to what Agito666 comment. Her right thigh looks cacat to me.
Even though she's crossing legs, it seems weird. Try to fix it.

ps: no need to draw sexy, because she's sexy already when she's wearing the normal cloth you saw in DBZ.
(to me, at least)

This post has been edited by XPAWNED01: Sep 1 2011, 04:07 PM

The expression,No. 18 cannot always be garang,so she have to be garang when drinking coffee?Let her enjoy the coffee,no need tension.
Right thigh?U mean the bottom one?I think it's okay,it's perspective.

Ur score?
Im not fixing this btw it's enough I waste my time when SPM trial is coming.
The sexy,it is just I want to exaggerate her sexy charisma and this is my drawing,I can let her wear anything or nothing at all,I am the author,u dont have the rights to determined what she's wearing

p.s Im dissapointed,I dont even see the word thanks.I think I wasted my time when I just fulfilled an unappreciated person's wish.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 1 2011, 05:12 PM

not feet problem, you refer to my siggy.
the normal tight also wide like that


should be something near like that

*duno is me or what, i feel head is slightly big

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 1 2011, 05:11 PM

Look carefully please,her thigh is wider than any normal woman in the world,the one in your siggy got asset in her legs,she is not normal,she is gifted.
Please do ur research on a wide range of observation and not dependent on one female only..

I think u are right on the thigh,what am I thinking,maybe I think too much on the pressure,I thought it was pressured by bottom thigh.
But the face lol,thats my style dont go change people style the way u like.
Not all people have small head.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 1 2011, 05:34 PM

Here's my thought: The table a bit low. Sort of cramp if the lady crosses her leg. I can only imagine her sitting sideway for her to do that. Second, normally people level their cup before drinking.

This post has been edited by DaddyO: Sep 1 2011, 06:49 PM

Now that I see it,looks like the leg has many flaw,I was rushing,thanks.What about the shading?Is it okay?
When can u post some serious illustration?I wanna see ur skills!