QUOTE(XPAWNED01 @ Sep 1 2011, 03:59 PM)
quite close to juuhachigo, try fix the expression. 18 needs more 'garang' look.
Anyhow, I also agree to what Agito666 comment. Her right thigh looks cacat to me.
Even though she's crossing legs, it seems weird. Try to fix it.
ps: no need to draw sexy, because she's sexy already when she's wearing the normal cloth you saw in DBZ.
(to me, at least)
The expression,No. 18 cannot always be garang,so she have to be garang when drinking coffee?

Let her enjoy the coffee,no need tension.
Right thigh?U mean the bottom one?I think it's okay,it's perspective.

Ur score?
Im not fixing this btw it's enough I waste my time when SPM trial is coming.
The sexy,it is just I want to exaggerate her sexy charisma and this is my drawing,I can let her wear anything or nothing at all,I am the author,u dont have the rights to determined what she's wearing
p.s Im dissapointed,I dont even see the word thanks.I think I wasted my time when I just fulfilled an unappreciated person's wish.
This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 1 2011, 05:12 PM