REPORTED SPEECHReport this conversation between two travellers, using ask, exclaim, guess, reply and say.
Elsa: So, where do you come from?
Banu: I'm from a small town on the Aegean coast, in Turkey, called Bodrum.
Elsa: Really? What a coincidence! I spent a few days there last summer.
Banu: Did you have a good time?
Elsa: Well, I was having a great time until I was bitten by a scorpion,
Banu: How terrible!
Elsa: And while I was in hospital, my boyfriend met an American girl from Nevada, They're getting married next month,
Banu: Oh, no!
Elsa: But then I met this fantastic Turkish boy called Kemal. Would you like to see a photo of him? He's very handsome.
Banu: I don't believe it! That's my brother. You must be Elsa!
Elsa: Yes! We've got a lot to talk about! Come on, let's go to the dining car.
My answer:
Elsa asked Banu where she
was came from. She replied that she was from a small town on the Aegean coast in Turkey, called Bodrum. Elsa exclaimed in surprise
of about the coincidence that she hadspent a few days at the place last summer. Banu asked her if she had a good time there. Elsa replied that she
was having a great time until she was bitten by a scorpion. Banu exclaimed that it was terrible. Elsa continued to say that while she was in hospital, her boyfriend met a American girl from Nevada, and
now they are that they
were getting married
the next month. She then said she
met a fantastic Turkish boy called Kemal. Elsa asked Banu if she would like to see a photo of him as he was very handsome. Banu expressed disbelief upon hearing that. She said that
it he was her brother and then she guessed Elsa's name correctly. Elsa confirmed that it was indeed her. She then suggested that they
should go went to the dining car as they
have had a lot to talk about.
Burning questions:1. Is the bolded part correct? I used that tense based on the deduction since the past simple tense is used to replace the present simple tense, then the present perfect tense should be used to replace the past simple tense.
It is not necessary to use the past perfect unless there is a need to distinguish the timing of two events, that one occurred before another.2. How do you express "Oh, no!" in reported speech??
sighed, lamented.3. If (1) is correct, what tense should I use when I encounter the past perfect in direct speech?
as above 4. Do I have any other serious mistakes in my answer?
as noted.