Hi, personally, I like to write poems to express my feelings, both in Mandarin and English.

Long after leaving secondary school, I became less active in writing poems.

Recently, have the urgent to revive this little hobby of mine when I was cleaning my room, and found some poems I wrote for school magazine last time. But, so long after not writing, I tend to forget the forms of poem I was once familiar with. Therefore, I started off by modifying poems written by others, just using them as skeletons, as to refresh my memory.

All are welcomed here to share your own poems. All poetic forms and genres in every languages are welcomed.

Nowadays, free verse is more common, but I genuinely respect those who can write in strict meter or rhyme, for one myself, am not a master in poetry.

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Added on September 21, 2008, 3:39 pmHere's my 1st post:

The Road Not Taken 2.0

A beauty I met in a small cafe,
And pardon if she is not well described,
Though as one stranger, long I stared,
And as long as fair others I ignored,
Drawn to where her inner beauty lies within;

Then took the food, as slow as I could,
And perhaps a longer coffee break,
Being the only moments as it would,
Divine intervention and reality,
Had become really about insanely same;


And that evening she softly touched,
In both my mind and heart forever stayed,
Oh, I longed the evening for another day,
Yet knowing how sunk it has became,
I doubted if I could ever meet her again.

I shall be telling this with a sigh,
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two souls never mended in a small cafe, and I—
I chose to let it passed,
And that has made all the difference in destiny.



This post has been edited by neo1024: Sep 21 2008, 03:39 PM

I wrote this a while back. Contents are quite negative...but...its a poem anyway. FREE SPEECH!!! Hope you guys don't take this too seriously ^^


Memoirs of an Otaku

Another night, another victimized slut,
Where are the tools of torture? I need to keep your god damn mouth shut,
God I can't stand this scream! Please allow me to have your facial tissue cut,
Yes...oh yes...UUUUUWWWWWAAAAARRRRR...such pain is such pleasure to my manly gut...

What shall I do now while your mouth is still covered with duct tape?
A fast kill? A slow death? Or a casual rape?
No...no no no...I'll enjoy it even more when I can get it all video taped...
What do I have in mind now...hm...I'm guessing...how about I carve you, while your face takes its shape...

The warmth of crimson blood gushing,
From your face it pours, down to my pants it is anticipating,
To rape you while you scream uncontrollably, enjoying...
The pain you feel, the pleasure I get...it is heavenly...breath taking...

Till the last breath, you never took your eyes away from me,
Was it that good? I asked you?, yet silence had its moment again, claiming the night to be,
Sweat, blood, cum, all the excitement overflowing, It had got me on my knees,
Claiming myself god to you...your soul has been cleansed, now you are free...

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Added on September 21, 2008, 3:51 pmMemoirs of an Otaku 2

Ten days, ten days I've been watching,
Deep down in my savage mind, I'm actually planning,
Your eyes, your lips, your sensual body...so tempting,
I could do you right here, right now, why endure this suffering..?

Train stops, train accelerates, your breasts move,
Deep down in me, I can't stand this torturous groove,
SAVAGE! RAVAGE! YOUR FACE, YOUR LIMBS I SHALL REMOVE!
For I am Psychotaku, my existence...I need not prove...

The end of the station, the starting of a planned execution,
I walk towards you, you hardly feel any sensation...
"How dare you!" My heart screamed in frustration,
For my body is god-like, SHOWING IT TO YOU...is nothing but god's salvation!

Your heart beats faster now, I can see...that is true,
For my hazel brown eyes looking right through you,
Your legs, sweating, spreading...anticipating the lost of your virtue...
One smile, one touch, oh...you love that don't you..?
And then...to be continue...

This post has been edited by veng: Sep 21 2008, 03:51 PM

wow, i was expecting something more proper. but anyway, good try! =.='

Memoirs of an Otaku 3


Give me a night to remember, oh sweet lady,
When shall I meet you again...tomorrow maybe?
Show yourself to me and claim the throne bestowed by me,
We'll share our lust and pleasure together...I wonder when shall it be...?

For the days are passing by so fast,
Where oh where can we see each other again I asked?
Let's hope this is the first and not the last,
For us I shall keep killing, raping, for our lust...

Drinking the crimson nectar under the moonlight,
Do you prefer it at night, or maybe at the break of a new light?
Does it matter? We'll enjoy it anyhow...am I right?
Sure sure...we'll always keep this secret tight...
Only you and me, conquering this cursed blood lust with all our might...

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Added on October 4, 2008, 3:28 amPanties, panties I adore you...
Colors of red, yellow, polka dots and also satin blue,
The smell, the scent, the touch, the view, makes my senses feel anew...
I'll kneel, I'll kill, I'll murder all, just to take a glance...or even play peek a boo.

Today I saw you, barely inches from my sight,
Your spaghetti straps, red tone with the scent of a zesty bite,
Today I saw your brassiere, it shone under the bright 12:37pm sunlight,
With colors of red straps, white cups with brown stripes...

You got me crazy there and then,
I felt your love shown to me, and to no men.
I shall remember this moment, I shall remember the brand,
Of your brassiere, I respect, I bow, I shall hold the bra always, in my hand...

I wanted to say I liked you,
As for time passes, we are now one, previously two.
My heart sickens, to hear you calling your boo,
How I wish, I had you alone, just for a night, me, you and maybe a drink too...

This lust, is like death, striking me slowly,
Killing my heart, darkens my soul, such agony,
I feel anger, I feel rage, I feel useless, as I can't get you out of my memory,
I'll kill you, I'll commit suicide, how did you manage my heart, so playfully...

I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...period.

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Added on October 4, 2008, 11:22 pmReaching down my pants, I took my first step,
You didn't notice me yet, I filled your mind with sexual sadistic crap,
Something shimmers, last you knew, your head was lying by my car mudflap,
I laughed hysterically, my laughter filled the entire corner of the map.

Your lies, your deceptions, I've managed to overturn it,
Pulling down my pants, I had to put myself into you, giving all else no shit,
We made love, we made magic, our senses filled sadist happiness into the depth of the bottomless pit,
Your head, I took and licked, the blood I took and drink. The high, it got me onto the maximum hit.

Your legs, I severed, your arms I kept,
Your neck, I sank my teeth into, I could swear I heard you wept,
Your torso, I twist, Your breast, I pressed it against my face and fapped,
You gave me pleasure, you gave me life...but still...It seems like my whole life seems trapped...

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Added on October 18, 2008, 12:54 amMelodic verses for the bored

Here I am, at this hour, at this night,
I can't sleep, I can't do shit, I can't think right,
Looking out, I saw cars, street lights, trees and the bright moonlight,
Why am I wide awake? Is there something amiss? I think with might.

Bored to the max! My mind is empty,
I fell that the night is young, yet I'm lazy,
I started to hear my voices speaking from within, am I crazy?
I tried to shut my mind, shut my ears, but it is useless honestly...

The refreshing winds of October night passes by,
The dark shades of purple took over the recently lit sky,
It'll rain soon I supposed, I hope thunder and lightning too would come by,
As I couldn't hope for anything more...such boredom, suffering till it made me cry.

Reaching out for the sky, I asked what is my task now?
Should I sleep, or do something radical...such as milking a cow?
Suddenly I felt stupid with myself, while raising my eyebrow...
I'm out of words, as you can see...I can't end this poem anymore with the tune of 'ow'...

This post has been edited by veng: Oct 18 2008, 12:54 AM

Dude, you've got talents.

How about poems for other themes?

Is this thread dead??

Well for my contribution. There was a sudden heavy downpour, and here it is:



Well done! I can't believe I actually enjoyed your poems.. I could actually feel the verve in your imagery... Do you actually write them while you were in action or after?