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Kain_Sicilian
post Sep 2 2009, 10:51 PM

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Is this thread dead??

Well for my contribution. There was a sudden heavy downpour, and here it is:

QUOTE
Inspiration

The resounding madness
Came upon me
Like the sudden
Splinters of rain

Piercing my
Cold Skin

And stopped.

Whilst

I sat

And

Bled.


QUOTE(veng @ Sep 24 2008, 12:58 AM)
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Well done! I can't believe I actually enjoyed your poems.. I could actually feel the verve in your imagery... Do you actually write them while you were in action or after?

 

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