Nice stuff.

However, there's something that you should keep in mind.

- She's apparently on a higher ground compared to the river. Is that intentional? If it does, then you might want to consider adding a path or a pile of rocks to help the viewer to imagine how she gets there. Right, will check for that, haha landscape is my weakness.

- Its unclear on what the bag leans on. Rocks, trees? TRUE, i didnt make it clear

- The closer the it is to the camera, the more the colors get saturated. It goes otherwise on things far to the horizon. this one i know, but WIP piece i just rough colour first to get feel XD

- The horizon line is wrong, you might want to bring the horizon line on the same level as her eyes. Its evident since we can see the upper part of her thighs and shoulders. If you do, then you might want to extend the background a little bit more. hmmm...dun get it

- You might want to get a custom brush for the leaves, since doing it one by one can be a pain in the arse. If you're willing to do so, then by all means. ya

That's my two cents. I'll comment more when its done. Oh by the way, you might want to add a brighter lightsource. Remember, sunlight is yellow, not white.

Here's the way i would put it. I wont break my brains trying to figure out where to put the rocks as part of the background, but i put alot of trees instead. haha. I use a normal dot point and set them really close together and dab them around with various green and yellow tones.

The red lines are the horizon line and vanishing lines too. I follow the vanishing points from the computer, and you did that spot on.

As i looked (and worked on it) i noticed that you have a double highlight on the character. Just so you know. And, i played around with some suitable shading tone for your character, and i tweaked to add some reds and purples in there, so that it would not look so bland. Oh, i added blues to the shadows as well.

Please pay attention to the water. Anything under the water becomes very saturated and remember, its not blue. The blue color comes from the sky, the water itself is transparent.

I had a little good fun tweaking your work. Keep it up!

So this is the place to share arts?Maan,I should post it here,but I already did that on my post,if I do it here again,no surprise factor anymore lol 

well, that's an idea. How about you modify that dome into something like a ruin thats been covered by trees and undergrowth? That would be cool. Since you already have a robot (tech advance confirmed) you would probably add space ship or some sort. Make it look interesting.

Actually not just plain colour bar adjustment,got more than that.
Not that post dude,my other post...so u havent see it?My scanner cant be used,so got only two scanned drawings,but I show one only laaa

Any constructive criticism are welcome.

Cant brain this part,it is no problem or a bit long for your taste?Actually long face resembles maturity and beauty altogether as full-grown woman only got this trait.
I dont draw mecha,tried,but gave up and it was abandoned when I was 13-14 years old,until now I dont start drawing mecha.

Im studying cloth fold line,but Im quite satisfied with the face shape,no need to improve.Mind if I know how old are you?

heheh.

Drawing mechs? I'm in. When's the deadline?

Oh,still young.
If u see my other post,I had stated that Im having trouble with shading.U sound like a pro,but I have to disagree.
Err,u should be more serious,that was a mess up lol,I still prefer mine though,and I think u should study more on faces,because that face is kinda ermm...awkward.
Are u serious?

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Added on August 25, 2011, 3:55 pm
Fix her skirt,not balanced well.

Im trolled.Alright,ur feelings.
LOL the skirt,but why I still see ur skirt is awkward?Maybe the perspective.

Ur machine drawing skill is good.Check back my post,edited.

uh uh uh..make me want to draw mech again..but back from work tired..I havent touch my Bamboo for quite a long time now..haish

No need read theory or whatever,u can see it for urself if any flaw that make the character looks deformed.

Law of anime,lol,not just anime,u should apply it on every humanoid drawings.