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Hi every sifu. I'm just a newbie in photography, photo taken by using Canon S2 IS. This can be considered as the 1st digital camera I owned (before this I don't have a digital camera, always use other ppl one, and i didn't have chance to play around as well). All of them i took inside my house. Photoshop is used to add the frame and the wording.
Anyway, comment needed for my picture 1. ![]() 2. ![]() 3. ![]() Thanks for viewing, and feel free to drop a comment (even a destructive / criticism one, as i need them too to improve) This post has been edited by nicholas_1213: Nov 8 2007, 12:56 AM |
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Nov 8 2007, 08:14 AM
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QUOTE(wlcling @ Nov 8 2007, 02:33 AM) Hi, i think your shots are good for a newbie albeit the usual composition issues. Seems your style is more towards the abstract side, so do shoot more while you train your eye for discerning interesting objects & patterns to make winning pictures! QUOTE(goldfries @ Nov 8 2007, 07:17 AM) 3 great shots. you put many DSLR newbies to shame you know. Oh really.. Now i see.. the frame.. noted only thing about your shot I'd say is try not to use transparent frames. and try to have nicer water mark. besides those stuff - great shots! btw for shot #2, i could say try to align the bars to be as straight as it could be while for #3, you might want to consider clearing the background or set it up nicely for the shot. Hehe, paiseh.. that messy bunch of junk on the table and also on the sofa.. Didn't realise it also |
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QUOTE(kelvinyam @ Nov 8 2007, 08:36 AM) Luckily I'm still using S3 and not SLR. So no shame on me. LOL Sharpen as in the effect done in the photoshop? Hehe, just got the cam for 3 days, will try to go out and shoot As for your photo, generally ok, a little sharpen will help on your reduced size photo. I think you got to go out and shoot QUOTE(travis_ckf @ Nov 8 2007, 10:19 AM) Seriously pretty impressive stuffs here. I just feel pic no 3 will be much better if a DSLR is used. Looks not so sharp to me on pic no 3. Thanks for your comment bro QUOTE(mindkiller6610 @ Nov 8 2007, 03:01 PM) Erm, just a wild guess.. OOF is out of focus? I was trying to use the macro function, guess that the output is not sharp enough ( on the particular area that i wanna focus ).. and the messy background QUOTE(goldfries @ Nov 8 2007, 04:14 PM) Hehe, alright |
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QUOTE(vikingw2k @ Nov 8 2007, 09:55 PM) Hehe bro.. but i really appreciate the 'lecture' u gave me hehe.. but sadly this will not be my toy after 1 month.. it'll stay in australia with my gf This post has been edited by nicholas_1213: Nov 8 2007, 11:07 PM |
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Ah haha sorry for the typo
Lol, no money to get a DSLR le, but to be frank, this cam ignites my interest towards photography, and now i learn to appreciate those pictures.. before that i used to think "it's just a picture, what is so special about it?" Now i learn |
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QUOTE(vichio @ Nov 9 2007, 06:09 AM) |
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QUOTE(cityfish @ Nov 11 2007, 09:50 AM) I like #2.... but as others mentioned, a bit OOF, sharper abit will be nice... Guess that a lot ppl like the pic 2 #3 if can remove the sofa and table, put on curtain on the window will be better.... I feel shame liao....don't know qualify to add comment here... Hey, don't feel so.. all i need is comment from you all so that i know where to improve.. but i personally like the piano pic, just that the stupid background.. |
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