If there want flim it there will find way to edit it. Sg drama will be more dare to take such script

good job plante.. !!! nice and smooth ending.

please continue write a new novel.

plant is the best writer in K/

yes, faster write, don't stop

woooo... but ending sadding mang

Glad you asked question, I don't mind people ask me question about the story, keep them coming.


but.. but.. but.. then no shooting in msia lior, become sg story, ur right about sg drama dare to take such script. I planned to pitch in msia first, if they don't want me.. i go sg to pitch it. I know some scene can improvise and some cannot. Also, tackling to make a movie out need me to think real hard, I know how msia film industry work and I am a film maker, I know the challenge already. I know there aren't many good actors in Malaysia willingly taking the role of Amy. Also, need to find a good producer, a film crew and cost. I have some connection but not enough resources to do it. Believe me, I thought about it every single day, to try to gather a film crew to me, but most young Malaysia film maker wants to be director, so... that is another problem. I need time, time i don't have the luxury. So i rather spend time doing something that is viable for me first.

thanks, but want to branch out of /k/ someday...

can, I also need put plate on the table to eat le, so i can't write story forever for free.. So now I just want to polish the story out then publish a book. I am also working on a indie game project, it's a story where you CHOOSE your path, still talking to the executive producer. lol

I'm also thinking writing Elle story, which take back 8 years ago, where she met a guy name William Wong, an assistance manager who works in I.T firm. We followed the story of William who tackle Elle, before she met Mr Cheah, before she become who she is today. A fresh new perspective.. does her story is true? about her dad and her family?

Consider it as Book 2.

ur welcome, glad you enjoyed it

This post has been edited by Plant: Dec 2 2014, 03:58 PM

gosh, i was so hoping Amy is based on a real person or character. Her innocence from Chapter 1 until her family background unfolded, till final chapter where she's in Plant's arm, again.

damm you writer!!


Elle, now I understand why you left her character undescribed extensively, except as the nurse and the psychotic mistress to Amy's dad.

I do agree Elle's backstory can be further expanded, especially from her upbringing to her being a mistress (willingly? desparation?) and her life with Ah Seng (Elle's accomplice to Ah Seng? or a victim to Ah Seng from his past?)...

for me youtube exactly is very good way to promo ur idea but like u say good actor is hard part. Unless u can find serious drama club from uni that willing to cooperate with u.

hehe, i leave some open ended story, as I treat my reader is as smart as I am. Also, At the end part, Amy intention were to confront Plant, that's it, until the song create a spark between those two. Plant and Amy know each other on another level, and when she decide to be with Plant is the sole reason both have lost what they have. Plant lose his career, his ability to walk properly again, then his best friend. Amy lose her family that is important to her, her wealth on living a luxuries life, her innocent for now knowing what's going on until it's too late. In a sense, both caught between a war that is not belong to them, that why Plant and Amy are meant to be together. A sad, tragic tale.

haha yea, agreed with you about Elle's backstory and yea, you have a sharp eye over there, about my intention on Elle. I like to think Elle fool everyone, even Ah Seng did not see it.

How she master to fool everyone? oh... let's say I don't want to reveal anything for now.

This post has been edited by Plant: Dec 2 2014, 04:54 PM

yay... gogo Chapter 19!!!:drool:

Good job plant, story needs some fix in language but nonetheless thanks for sharing it for free. Not bad on the content but I believe you will get better with experience gained from writing more or from studying more on other authors.

Keep up the good work and don't give up.

I am Jason?

Im GK la.

Great job Plant, agree with some readers here that you need to fix some of the english in your story. No doubt very well plan and executed, at the very least made us having the urge to read it till the end.

Hope your life is way better than what is in this story!!! Will support your future projects, give us a holler!

By the terms used in the story, Plant must be a banker. Specifically in investment banking I guess

thank you for your kind input, will think about it

no chapter 19 , a fresh new story from chapter 1

Thank you for forgiving my grammar problem, I tried to improve it every single day, I am thinking to attend English course so in the future I don't need to have an editor to help me fix it. Believe it or not, when I read "Gone Girl" book and lurking reddit writer prompt sub club, which helped me so much in writing as first person perspective, I started to write seriously at chapter 14.

Thank you for reading it till the end with my silly grammar problem.

This post has been edited by Plant: Dec 3 2014, 07:17 AM

Why u no put my name in ur review??!!!

where's ur review?

Nice read

thx for story plant, every week i try to tune in to read it, ive been following it since your first chapter, a silent reader....

great story

Plant if u make amy story as series, i wanna act

important is who act as Amy.