Thanks TS. great story. what an ending. But still couldnt understand some detail. Datuk kill ah Seng but how ah Seng give him the photo before he died

thanks all, for liking mah story =) apologies for the grammar, will fixed it and polish it soon, I promised.

yea i know, /k/ earn 20k every month, sure can fund

but seriously, thanks ar. Maybe after Chinese new year, i might do a 2mins trailer, and later see how first. =)
btw, I am a film maker, I was taught in the west, so that might work

This part le.. I left it out purposely, leave it to you reader imagination. Maybe datuk kill ah seng, maybe other people kill ah seng, u know how many people ah seng conned and want him dead? it's all over the news, who kill ah seng is someone guess... part of the story telling, Christopher Nolan style.

edit : remembered, plant is oblivious on the art of conning, like making enemy and other thing. I wrote it like plant perspective of innocent. Remember one part Plant ask ah seng to teach him to con people but ah Seng refused? yea ah seng knows many thing and don't want to tell Plant. A good friend indeed =)

I can flesh out the court part but i am not comfortable writing as i have no experience in that field. I did some research, but got confused.
haha yea, everyone want ah seng not die but remembered, part of the story of karma. He conned many people, he gets what he deserve.

This post has been edited by Plant: Dec 1 2014, 01:37 PM

Wahhh thanks yo

Kesian call me random tak masuk

Done Reading all chapter on the day you released it. interesting story. Will you continue with new chapter?

meh.....he redeem himself by saving quite a few people ...why i say few people....because of the chain effect of bringing down Mr Cheah, Jason and Daryl.


btw.....when someone get arrested in malaysia, they don't get their right read. They got no rights at all.

This post has been edited by MakaiKnight: Dec 1 2014, 01:41 PM

maybe tell elle story, when she was innocent.

good point u have there. I ask you a question, in the real world, if u saw someone who conned you before is on the news? and u have the power to kill that person, would u do it? regardless of what he have done good for others, in the end of the day, he conned you. Maybe, think about it friend.

my brother in law works in the police force, he says got, once you are in the police station but very rare

edit : reading right isn't like the U.S where the police men will says you have the right to hire attorney blab blab, a very brief reading right.

This post has been edited by Plant: Dec 1 2014, 01:59 PM

book needed

yes.. if ur dream is as real as plant in the story then i believe /k/ army will do the necessary
will wait for ur trailer

Thanks! plant

[quote=Plant,Dec 1 2014, 02:52 PM]
maybe tell elle story, when she was innocent.

Nice, Elle's character is way too different than I thought. She the innocent but devil inside type. I wonder how she look like in real life.

in page 1, got artist impression.

nice picture, u drew it? look nice =)

This post has been edited by Plant: Dec 1 2014, 03:44 PM

Good job to make readers root for Ah Seng.. Real frend for Plant..and outsmart mr.cheah...

I have finish read all chapter.

Finally, it a good ending but sadly Ah Seng tragedy.
Thumb up for for Plant finish up all chapter in one shoot.

Looking forward perhaps is a book or new story.

Woahh.. Saw already. heeee~

Nahh.. Just took from another blog.

Plant,

I would like to thank you for giving us the opportunity to show support for your stories which is ..

so addictive i would say that made me "refresh the page every single day"

"Plant, you are a William Shakespeare in the Making"

looking forward for more to come..

Thanks for summoning me!


Holy f**k! 18 chapters! All's Well Ending was great! Sad to know Ah Seng is gone.


I must say, Ah Seng is indeed a good buddy. May he rest in peace.

in US, they call it the Miranda Rights. without reading it prior to arrest/interrogation of any sort, future indictment (if any) would technically falls apart. this is the citizen's rights, Fifth Amendments, iinm.

p/s: watching too much police tv series

support for plant!

welcome bro.
wah, William Shakespeare? that's the highest praise someone can give me. I dunno about that, but thank you very much, indeed!

welcome bro.

woah, since u like police tv series, I was writing a Malaysia detective story, followed by two main protagonist, a Malay, in her mid 20's named Anita Hamzal, work her way up to homicide detective, the youngest female detective in Malaysia police force, she is a strong female character lead, that don't take shit from other. And a Chinese guy, Junior detective, nicknamed "Case", who been jail for two years that saved a little girl by shooting her in the chest, there is a reason why "case" do that, but we don't know yet. In the public eye, he is a killer, but to Anita, he is someone that will aid her to solve the case of a copycat pedophile series killer in Malaysia, one of man hunt in Malaysia history.

Ada racist.
Ada piap piap.
Ada multicultural race working as one to solve the murder.
Ada banyak ranting about sensitive topic
Ada mindfuk.
No gangster involve.

Planning to pitch it to astro as tv serial.. I bet they going to reject me, classified as *too sensitive* lol. Cause in the first opening scene, you will see the original killer confessing how he molest little girl and kill them. lolz.

but, i need to do more research Malaysia police work....... later ppls point out, I kantoi.

Anyways, I just polished up Chapter 1, adding some detail in it. When I finished up polishing Amy story, I will publish it as a book, please buy my book hor.... If gather enough attention, then can make a TV shows, then you all who read the story knows everything what happen next, for the new viewer who watch it will be like wtf! and you will be like

i'm wondering. is Amy based on real person? anything about her is true except the family?