QUOTE(RED-HAIR-SHANKS @ Nov 7 2014, 05:01 PM)
Hi
yellowpika and
Just Visiting By, and here I have a short question for both of you.
Is it necessary to put in some low-frequency words or any relatable quotes from famous people around the globe in order to increase our marks in language for the Writing component? I observed that a friend of mine always will score higher marks for his MUET essay practice due to him inserting words that are jargon as well as citing quotes from people like Sir Alex Ferguson, Beethoven, and to the likes of Charles Darwin in an essay. I also found out that whenever I write a piece of essay that does not exceed 2 pages, my marks will be below Band 4. So, is it wise to make our essay to be verbose if possible?
Thanks for your replies.
It would be better if you can add in relevant quotes. Writing irrelevant quotes that seem impressive will backfire.
Write your essay the way you normally do. Follow your style, that's how certain writers become famous. They write the way they want, and they become famous.
For MUET, if you wanna aim a high band, show profound maturity and wide knowledge. Using bombastic words cannot impress the markers much. Show them you read much, and show them you have skills to argue.
This is where PA comes in handy. If MUET questions ask "What has Malaysia contributed to the globe?", write that Malaysia is a member of UN security council, and what conflicts has its resolved. Write points that show you read a lot, and you know a lot.
MUET is aimed to gauge a student's proficiency in English at university level. In university students are already expected to be able to write a scientific or an official report/document. So maturity and knowledge matter.
I never wrote an essay exceeding 2 pages. One and a half is enough, too long bores the marker.
Make it short and compact. That impresses better than long and annoying.
By the way it is still possible to get an overall of Band 5 without getting Band 5 for writing part. I got only 53/90 (I would like to say when I sat for the test, I did not know the format for data synthesis, and the long essay I got has no facts to write) and overall I still managed to secure 220/300. Ya, I was damn lucky!