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post Aug 9 2006, 07:05 PM, updated 20y ago

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its an assignment where we re-design the new logo for the national zoo, making it an international logo. Im thinking of getting a more suitable fonts for it. Any suggestions? Is there anything else to improve? unsure.gif

edit: yeah, ignore my nick inside tongue.gif And i took some resource in DA, just rearranged it.

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post Aug 9 2006, 07:11 PM

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hem...looks good.

but sometimes look likes butterfly farm logo. butterfly graphic too outstanding from others characters. better if you put an animal like 'orang utan' as the main subject.

just my 2 cent
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post Aug 9 2006, 07:14 PM

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if according to what johnjenin said, I think is because of the butterfly is too shine...
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post Aug 9 2006, 07:15 PM

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very nice design. thumbup.gif

agree with the "butterfly problem" though.
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post Aug 9 2006, 07:15 PM

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IMHO,
- shrink the flutterby, put some elephant or orang utan up
- change the font

everything else looks really good to me, especially the colour, great.
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post Aug 9 2006, 09:00 PM

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Put the butterfly "behind" and make animals more obvious.
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post Aug 9 2006, 09:03 PM

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that butterfly can be my blog's title brows.gif

nah ,just kidding, I wont simply stole people's effort smile.gif
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post Aug 9 2006, 09:18 PM

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You make this using what?
Ya I agree with the butterfly thing too big, maybe you can use different animal.
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post Aug 9 2006, 09:54 PM

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The color. I feel something not right there.
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post Aug 9 2006, 11:16 PM

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Yea, I feel the same too. The area around the butterflies and squares, you need to adjust alil colors. That's all. And uhmm, overally, it's a professional and nice logo. good job, keep up =) wish you luck in designing a 10/10 rating logo.
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post Aug 9 2006, 11:35 PM

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I dislike the whole logo but I like the text. It has a Discovery Channel feel to it.

What's your rationale for the logo?
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post Aug 9 2006, 11:38 PM

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mcm taman rama-rama je !!!!! unsure.gif
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post Aug 10 2006, 12:14 AM

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i like the whole design + font
color could be brighter..
now a bit fading away..
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post Aug 10 2006, 01:27 AM

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Nice logo, dont change the font it fit nicely. It just that your watermark kinda distrupt the b/g colour for logo icon.
U got to agree with them, its looks like "Butterfly park". IMHO why not reduce the butterfly abit and put it on logo edge. Dont make it too standout.

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hmmm, the colors and the butterfly huh? biggrin.gif

etsuko: i like the fonts too. I dont know about the rational though, the aim is to make a new updated version of the national park logo. It needs a fresher look. Yet suitable for an international logo. The colors, red, blue and yellow is the color of the malaysian flag. That's it. I just hope the logo will be presentable... =/

ill redo it tomo then. smile.gif good night guys.
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What's the last creature in the pic(most right one)?? unsure.gif
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post Aug 10 2006, 02:12 AM

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QUOTE(AiRBooM @ Aug 10 2006, 01:58 AM)
What's the last creature in the pic(most right one)??  unsure.gif
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elephant maybe...

nice logo thumbup.gif ...how about more malaysian colors..just an opinion...
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QUOTE(apek @ Aug 10 2006, 04:12 AM)
elephant maybe...

nice logo thumbup.gif ...how about more malaysian colors..just an opinion...
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It doesn't look like elephant lar... sweat.gif
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post Aug 10 2006, 08:28 AM

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nice!..but quite fancy...1 or 2 colour maybe look more interesting...just my 0.0001cent
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the watermark is disturbing & the butterfly..make it smaller....separated it..& trail flying

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