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Rate my final logo, College assignment.
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TSR a D ! c 4 L
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Aug 9 2006, 07:05 PM, updated 20y ago
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Linc | Nox
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 its an assignment where we re-design the new logo for the national zoo, making it an international logo. Im thinking of getting a more suitable fonts for it. Any suggestions? Is there anything else to improve?  edit: yeah, ignore my nick inside  And i took some resource in DA, just rearranged it. This post has been edited by R a D ! c 4 L: Aug 9 2006, 07:07 PM
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johnjenin
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Aug 9 2006, 07:11 PM
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hem...looks good.
but sometimes look likes butterfly farm logo. butterfly graphic too outstanding from others characters. better if you put an animal like 'orang utan' as the main subject.
just my 2 cent
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akira de aimbuster
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Aug 9 2006, 07:14 PM
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if according to what johnjenin said, I think is because of the butterfly is too shine...
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vincentlee
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Aug 9 2006, 07:15 PM
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very nice design. agree with the "butterfly problem" though.
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bobtiang
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Aug 9 2006, 07:15 PM
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IMHO, - shrink the flutterby, put some elephant or orang utan up - change the font
everything else looks really good to me, especially the colour, great.
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Femi
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Aug 9 2006, 09:00 PM
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Put the butterfly "behind" and make animals more obvious.
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akira de aimbuster
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Aug 9 2006, 09:03 PM
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that butterfly can be my blog's title  nah ,just kidding, I wont simply stole people's effort
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tunertoobe
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Aug 9 2006, 09:18 PM
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You make this using what? Ya I agree with the butterfly thing too big, maybe you can use different animal.
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Dark Steno
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Aug 9 2006, 09:54 PM
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baaaaaaa
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The color. I feel something not right there.
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Resphoina
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Aug 9 2006, 11:16 PM
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Yea, I feel the same too. The area around the butterflies and squares, you need to adjust alil colors. That's all. And uhmm, overally, it's a professional and nice logo. good job, keep up =) wish you luck in designing a 10/10 rating logo.
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etsuko
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Aug 9 2006, 11:35 PM
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Spaced out person
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I dislike the whole logo but I like the text. It has a Discovery Channel feel to it.
What's your rationale for the logo?
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2uk3y
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Aug 9 2006, 11:38 PM
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mcm taman rama-rama je !!!!!
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prazole
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Aug 10 2006, 12:14 AM
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i like the whole design + font color could be brighter.. now a bit fading away..
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izzNatta
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Aug 10 2006, 01:27 AM
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Getting Started

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Nice logo, dont change the font it fit nicely. It just that your watermark kinda distrupt the b/g colour for logo icon. U got to agree with them, its looks like "Butterfly park". IMHO why not reduce the butterfly abit and put it on logo edge. Dont make it too standout.
This post has been edited by izzNatta: Aug 10 2006, 01:28 AM
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TSR a D ! c 4 L
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Aug 10 2006, 01:53 AM
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Linc | Nox
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hmmm, the colors and the butterfly huh?  etsuko: i like the fonts too. I dont know about the rational though, the aim is to make a new updated version of the national park logo. It needs a fresher look. Yet suitable for an international logo. The colors, red, blue and yellow is the color of the malaysian flag. That's it. I just hope the logo will be presentable... =/ ill redo it tomo then.  good night guys.
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AiRBooM
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Aug 10 2006, 01:58 AM
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What's the last creature in the pic(most right one)??
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apek
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Aug 10 2006, 02:12 AM
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QUOTE(AiRBooM @ Aug 10 2006, 01:58 AM) What's the last creature in the pic(most right one)??  elephant maybe... nice logo  ...how about more malaysian colors..just an opinion...
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AiRBooM
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Aug 10 2006, 07:40 AM
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QUOTE(apek @ Aug 10 2006, 04:12 AM) elephant maybe... nice logo  ...how about more malaysian colors..just an opinion... It doesn't look like elephant lar...
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mufasa
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Aug 10 2006, 08:28 AM
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nice!..but quite fancy...1 or 2 colour maybe look more interesting...just my 0.0001cent
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tsg
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Aug 10 2006, 08:34 AM
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the watermark is disturbing & the butterfly..make it smaller....separated it..& trail flying
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