Sophia Teh
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 Aug 26 2012, 11:41 PM, updated 14y ago
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Dear Sifu,
Welcome CNC on my album. I believe this time I din provide best of me while shooting this.  2 hours slp only really screw up this album but welcome to hard bashing critics ya.. IMG_1586 copy by MichaelChng, on Flickr  4 copy by MichaelChng, on Flickr  IMG_1616 by MichaelChng, on Flickr  IMG_1633 by MichaelChng, on Flickr  IMG_1630 by MichaelChng, on Flickr  IMG_1609 by MichaelChng, on Flickr |
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Aug 27 2012, 11:56 AM
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last pic a bit odd cos the grass is overlapping her face. granted it is bokeh'ed out but surely it should not directly overlap her nose and eyes?
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Aug 27 2012, 09:47 PM
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QUOTE(deodorant @ Aug 27 2012, 11:56 AM) last pic a bit odd cos the grass is overlapping her face. granted it is bokeh'ed out but surely it should not directly overlap her nose and eyes? Noted..   will future i will avoid this kind of mistake.. |
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Aug 28 2012, 10:22 AM
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Skin can be smoothen
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Aug 28 2012, 10:24 AM
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QUOTE(Ask_Yip @ Aug 28 2012, 10:22 AM) Skin can be smoothen Noted! My bad mistake not smoothen enough her face.. |
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Aug 28 2012, 10:34 AM
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Hmm... The photos were taken on Sunday morning near QBM right....
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Aug 28 2012, 10:42 AM
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2,540 posts Joined: Mar 2008 From: KL
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I like pic #3 from the top. Please do number your pics so that it's easy to refer to in future, ok?
The other pics, I feel that you are not actually 'in the shoot'. Meaning it gives me the feeling that you are not exactly sure what you wanted from the shot. Like it's neither here nor there. Especially apparent in pic #4 where you cropped off too much of her head but the model's expression does not seem to show anything to the viewer and the series also do not show or tell us anything. For me I believe if you were to invest some emotions into the shots, they will be much better. E.g. if you want to show her to be happy, show us why she is happy. If you want to show us loneliness, then don't have the model smile and tell her to give us some lonely faces or stare off blankly into space. That kinda of thing. Just my 2 cents.. |
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Aug 28 2012, 10:52 AM
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QUOTE(Kenn @ Aug 28 2012, 10:34 AM) Hmm... The photos were taken on Sunday morning near QBM right.... Yup.. 1 hours shooting only..QUOTE(shootkk @ Aug 28 2012, 10:42 AM) I like pic #3 from the top. Please do number your pics so that it's easy to refer to in future, ok? Actually you kinda right at certain point, I not in the mood due lack of sleep and hangover night before due surprise birthday celebration..The other pics, I feel that you are not actually 'in the shoot'. Meaning it gives me the feeling that you are not exactly sure what you wanted from the shot. Like it's neither here nor there. Especially apparent in pic #4 where you cropped off too much of her head but the model's expression does not seem to show anything to the viewer and the series also do not show or tell us anything. For me I believe if you were to invest some emotions into the shots, they will be much better. E.g. if you want to show her to be happy, show us why she is happy. If you want to show us loneliness, then don't have the model smile and tell her to give us some lonely faces or stare off blankly into space. That kinda of thing. Just my 2 cents.. but that is not excuse can be accepted by myself. Future onward must sleep enough before shooting or else screw up big time.. |
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Aug 28 2012, 01:55 PM
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QUOTE(deodorant @ Aug 27 2012, 11:56 AM) last pic a bit odd cos the grass is overlapping her face. granted it is bokeh'ed out but surely it should not directly overlap her nose and eyes? i feel that is ok la, taiwan style, use leaf to cover face, malaysia style use grass  |
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Aug 28 2012, 02:20 PM
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nice, not bad.
I like #3, nitpick , dof too thin or perhaps it's ps error. |
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Aug 28 2012, 02:31 PM
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QUOTE(onghy @ Aug 28 2012, 01:55 PM) i feel that is ok la, taiwan style, use leaf to cover face, malaysia style use grass lol.. use grass.. those grass got torn.. i cannot take responsibities anything happen on her face.. QUOTE(nicotine @ Aug 28 2012, 02:20 PM) nice, not bad. Thank! There is might some PS error, i will take note more on next round editing.I like #3, nitpick , dof too thin or perhaps it's ps error. |
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Aug 29 2012, 11:46 AM
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QUOTE(Ask_Yip @ Aug 28 2012, 10:22 AM) Skin can be smoothen Haha, I respectfully disagree... looks okay to me le~ ><Nice shots, CPU-san~ |
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Aug 29 2012, 11:53 AM
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QUOTE(Hexlord @ Aug 29 2012, 11:46 AM) Haha, I respectfully disagree... looks okay to me le~ >< Aligato!!! Nice shots, CPU-san~ hope future can provide better photo for viewer. |
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Aug 30 2012, 09:24 AM
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QUOTE(Hexlord @ Aug 29 2012, 11:46 AM) Haha, I respectfully disagree... looks okay to me le~ >< Diff people diff taste Nice shots, CPU-san~ |
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