last pic a bit odd cos the grass is overlapping her face. granted it is bokeh'ed out but surely it should not directly overlap her nose and eyes?

Skin can be smoothen

Hmm... The photos were taken on Sunday morning near QBM right....

I like pic #3 from the top. Please do number your pics so that it's easy to refer to in future, ok?

The other pics, I feel that you are not actually 'in the shoot'. Meaning it gives me the feeling that you are not exactly sure what you wanted from the shot. Like it's neither here nor there. Especially apparent in pic #4 where you cropped off too much of her head but the model's expression does not seem to show anything to the viewer and the series also do not show or tell us anything.

For me I believe if you were to invest some emotions into the  shots, they will be much better. E.g. if you want to show her to be happy, show us why she is happy. If you want to show us loneliness, then don't have the model smile and tell her to give us some lonely faces or stare off blankly into space. That kinda of thing.

Just my 2 cents..

i feel that is ok la, taiwan style, use leaf to cover face, malaysia style use grass  

nice, not bad.
I like #3, nitpick , dof too thin or perhaps it's ps error.

Haha, I respectfully disagree... looks okay to me le~ ><

Nice shots, CPU-san~