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DragonReine
post Aug 11 2012, 08:20 AM

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@ Adam

Quality comes with practice, sweetie smile.gif

You have to remember, all paintings go through an "ugly" phase, which starts from somewhere around 20% completion and ends only when the painting is about 90% complete.

At this stage, the painting may look horrible, terrible, and really bad, and you will very likely think "---- this, I'm not finishing it" at some point during this phase, but you have to push through that mental barrier and complete the painting. It may not be your best work, but it DOESN'T MATTER. The point is that you can and will complete whatever you set out to do; quitting halfway only starts a nasty downward spiral where you start to get discouraged very easily in future projects. So just bite the damn bullet and finish your work. You won't regret finishing it, and at the very least, you'll be able to train your mind to keep your tenacity when working on art.

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Unrelated, here's something I've been working on, and it's about 75% complete:

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Added on August 11, 2012, 8:22 am
QUOTE(babycookie @ Aug 10 2012, 11:54 PM)
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Oh, so very cute and fluffy wub.gif

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post Aug 12 2012, 11:28 AM

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Meme funsies:

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post Aug 13 2012, 08:06 PM

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@ Shinkawa

Feel free to visit the archived art yourself if you wish:

http://dragonreine.deviantart.com/art/Rion...trait-215067731

http://dragonreine.deviantart.com/art/Bran...Hanks-314598251
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post Aug 15 2012, 12:40 AM

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Clichéd, but fun:

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post Aug 15 2012, 07:34 PM

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LOL yes, I know that now. The dA version has the right year, tho sweat.gif
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post Aug 29 2012, 09:28 PM

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QUOTE(Loto @ Aug 28 2012, 07:06 PM)
Slightly improved! Well, sorta. But it has shadows now!
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I'm still not satisfied with the outcome of this but I don't know why. Help?
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There are a few technical issues...

QUOTE(LIGHT AND SHADOW)

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Probably the most obvious one. The cast shadows are not consistent with the overall lighting scheme of the subject. If the light comes from the upper right, the shadows should be in the lower left of the subject.

There is also very little contrast between the highlights (brightest parts) and accents (darkest parts) of the painting, and you didn't take into account the different reflective properties of the different materials (fur, leather, cloth, metal etc)


QUOTE(Tangents)
A visual tangent is created when shapes or edges within the art touch in a way that is visually irritating. It disrupts the "flow" of the image and creates ambiguous shapes that make it difficult for the eye to isolate different elements in the artwork.

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The red lines indicate where there are hidden/stolen edges. Because of the way the edges are aligned, it makes the two characters appear weirdly joined together, since the curves of the edges visually blend into each other.


QUOTE(Contrast)
The two characters share the same amount of contrast and detail. This gives the impression that the characters are viewed from the same distance. Generally, when you want to create the illusion of depth and three-dimensions, you make the focal point of the painting have the sharpest contrast and the most details. Anything that is "off-focus" should be blurred and less contrasting. This helps the viewer to visually separate the different elements in the drawing.

The following image gives an example of how the overall image should look like, assuming the left/foreground figure is meant to be the focal point.

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You can see that the foreground figure stands out the most, while the figure farther back seems to blend in slightly to the background.
QUOTE(Composition)
This could simply be an effect of the way the camera is aligned when the image is taken, or how you cropped the image, but the composition of the drawing is not ideal.

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I made a few adjustments to the drawing, to help illustrate the difference it makes if you change a few things. Mostly I corrected the lighting and the contrast, and I also took the liberty of changing the tones between the clothing and the figure, to further emphasize the contrast:

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post Aug 29 2012, 10:30 PM

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Why? No good? biggrin.gif
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post Sep 1 2012, 01:09 AM

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... not entirely happy with how the landscape is turning out so far. Too Chinese-style for a Wild-West setting, haha
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post Sep 2 2012, 03:38 PM

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Thanks, Mr Mango! biggrin.gif

Another WIP, college romance, yay!

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post Sep 4 2012, 10:58 PM

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It's awesome to see your improvement over time, Agito!
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post Sep 7 2012, 06:21 PM

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Greek myth!

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post Sep 9 2012, 07:32 PM

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QUOTE(LingLingFat @ Sep 9 2012, 06:58 PM)
Hey guys wanna ask sumting here.

Where can you find these in Msia? Do you know someone / someplace that you can get this from?

I'm looking for cheap plastic standard pen holders (in packs) and some manga nibs..

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You can find them in art speciality shops. I know of one shop in Klang Valley that sells these ("Art Friend" in The Gardens Mid Valley) and there are other shops in the commercial area near Sunway Pyramid that also sells art tools.
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post Sep 9 2012, 07:51 PM

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Should be able to. PM me what you're looking for, exactly?
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post Sep 10 2012, 07:46 PM

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QUOTE(Agito666 @ Sep 10 2012, 05:43 PM)
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personal i feel this is not really good =x
done in midnight due to coffee intake in late night and family problem.
go see the serious kopitiam topic i created if really want busybody.
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She seems to be missing her hips. blink.gif

I'd seen the serious kopitiam topic before sad.gif I want to say something but not sure if I should unsure.gif

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post Sep 14 2012, 06:57 AM

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Prop to be used for a larger painting

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post Sep 14 2012, 06:45 PM

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QUOTE(Loto @ Sep 14 2012, 02:15 PM)
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:I

that's a harp, right?
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A chelys, actually: It is an ancient Greek stringed instrument, said to be invented by Hermes from the guts of cattle he stole from Apollo and a tortoise shell. It isn't actually like a harp, because the harp is played by plucking; the Greeks played the chelys by strumming with a plectrum, like a guitar.

You can see the strumming technique in the video below, from 2:54 onwards, using a reconstructed lyre.






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post Sep 15 2012, 04:29 PM

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QUOTE(FireFryXx @ Sep 15 2012, 12:18 PM)
you guys, do you have problem like art thief? Claim your artwork to be s/he 's artwork??
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Haha, I actually had my art used without permission and without credit before, but no actual art thieves (yet).
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post Sep 20 2012, 07:15 AM

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Work in Progress...

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post Sep 21 2012, 09:38 PM

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QUOTE(Adamiquesce @ Sep 21 2012, 01:50 AM)
waaaaa looks like a portrait commission hmm.gif
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Yeah, it is biggrin.gif

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I probably should learn how to be less fussy on details, but I rather like how the mandolin design turned out:

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post Sep 21 2012, 09:50 PM

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Yup, reference smile.gif

I want to put some wood texture on the surface, but the texture distracts from the main focus of the painting O_O ah well, it works as it is when zoomed out, LOL

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