being lacuni is suffering
My Short Stories / Fanfic, feel free to post your own here too
My Short Stories / Fanfic, feel free to post your own here too
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Jul 17 2012, 05:13 PM
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being lacuni is suffering
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Jul 17 2012, 05:20 PM
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So far so good. Minor niggles here and there but
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Jul 17 2012, 05:21 PM
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Jul 17 2012, 06:10 PM
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Jul 18 2012, 08:30 AM
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This is good stuff!! Keep it up
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Jul 19 2012, 11:05 AM
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Elite
2,540 posts Joined: Mar 2008 From: KL |
Bee... waiting for your addition...
The internet connection at my house will not be restored until the 21st so I can't play... so at least let me write the story in the meantime... Bee... hurry... |
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Jul 19 2012, 04:11 PM
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QUOTE(shootkk @ Jul 19 2012, 11:05 AM) Bee... waiting for your addition... you can continue 1st, im not in office this 2 days, not feeling well, house no MS word laThe internet connection at my house will not be restored until the 21st so I can't play... so at least let me write the story in the meantime... Bee... hurry... Added on July 23, 2012, 1:40 pmNEW UPDATE! » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... « This post has been edited by The Amateur Working Bee: Jul 23 2012, 01:41 PM |
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Jul 24 2012, 10:20 AM
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2,540 posts Joined: Mar 2008 From: KL |
As suddenly as they appeared, the lacunis disappeared. Cassie took a quick look around and found that the huge lacuni leader had fallen. Standing over it was the equally huge fire golem that had started to crumble away as the magic that summoned it dissipated.
Truly, this necromancer was not to be trifled with. Quickly snapping out of it, Cassie spoke to the necromancer. "See? Those wretched beasts are what drew us in here. We truly did not mean to intrude," Cassie built upon her first lie. The necromancer seemed unconvinced but she could see that his hostility towards them drop a notch. The demon hunter now stepped out of the shadows which hid her well. "Truly it was those lacunis that I was after," the demon hunter spoke. It was not a lie after all. It just wasn't the whole truth. "Very well then, " the necromancer finally said. "I shall pardon your insolence for this time but it intrigues me that even lowly lacunis dared to encroach upon my domain. What has happened in the world outside? Might I have slumbered too long and not aware of events that I should be concerned about?" Cassie made her way to stand beside the demon hunter. One has to keep up appearances after all if one wishes to keep the deceit going. "Oh, you truly did not know?" Cassie asked when she heard the necromancer's question. "Well, I'm a bit vague on the details but word has it that a lord of the burning hells is now walking the very surface of Sanctuary as we speak. We know not of their design but it is fact that all kinds of beasts have been corrupted and now wreaks havoc where ever they can be found." "Really?" the necromancer asked in surprise. "Yes," Cassie answered. "We will be taking our leave now. Please accept our apology for the intrusion. We will bother you no more," Cassie added and quietly took the demon hunter's hand to start leading her away. "If I may just have one request before you leave," the necromancer said, his voice laced with threat. "Would you be so kind as to stay for dinner and tell me about this latest development. I am most interested in it. It has been long since I have had guests and even longer still when it comes to guests as attractive as you both." Cassie stopped dead in her tracks. The threat was clear. They are not just going to walk away from this. She had started the lie and it would not be fair to drag the demon hunter into all this. "Why I would be glad to tell you all I know," Cassie spoke before the demon hunter can say anything and spell doom for both of them. "But please excuse milady. She has other urgent matters to attend to. Isn't that right, milady? I shall meet you back in Caldeum after dinner," Cassie said, turning to the demon hunter. Cassie looked staight at the demon hunter, pleading with her to go now before it's too late using her eyes. This post has been edited by shootkk: Jul 24 2012, 10:32 AM |
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Jul 24 2012, 05:25 PM
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so, hawt lesbo scene afta this??
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Jul 25 2012, 12:52 PM
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Aug 7 2012, 12:23 PM
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Ok. I'm hijacking this thread. I'm trying to revive this one.
Bee, hope you don't mind. Here's the long awaited next part... ********* "So it's highly possible that Belial, the Lord of Lies is somehow having a hold over the palace in Caldeum," Cassie informed her host. For the past half hour, she has been sitting uneasily across the table from the necromancer who had inexplicably prepared a lavish dinner spread for them. "Is that so?" Lord Drakken replied. "That's the perception out there," Cassie said, trying to avoid Drakken's gaze. She knows that he's paying scant attention to their conversation. He's has been eyeing her the moment they had stepped into the room. Cassie had barely eaten and now that she feels that enough time had passed to avoid a seemingly hasty retreat, she made her attempt to leave. "Well, it has been a splendid dinner," she said forcing a smile. "I really should be going now." "Why the hurry?" Lord Drakken asked, his tone teasing. "You haven't even had dessert yet." "No, I really can't," Cassie politely declined and stood up from the table to leave. "I really must be going.." "Oh, but you must stay for dessert," Drakken insisted, cutting Cassie off. "I insist!" Cassie felt her legs grow weak. She fell back into her chair. The necromancer's spell is strong. Cassie concentrated and summoning her reserves, stood again and managed a few steps away from the table. "I'm sorry..but I must take my leave.." she said, every word seemingly needing a lot of strength. She made a beeline towards the door out of the large dining chamber. "Don't you know it's rude to abruptly leave the dining table?" the necromancer teased again and got up. "Especially when your host is not done savouring the meal yet." Cassie made no attempt to reply. She needed to get out of the room fast. She willed her feet to keep moving despite the weakness that she felt. A few more steps and she stumbled. Then disorientation came over her. She could not even find where the door was. She then heard footsteps closing in. Drakken walked slowly towards his prey. She could barely stand. He smiled wickedly. His weakening and confusion spells were a lethal combo. Few had ever escaped from them. "Do you really think that I would just let the most delicious bite walk off my plate?" he gloated and let off a maniacal laugh. Cassie felt the necromancer closing. She focussed hard on keeping her mind clear. When she felt the necromancer right beside her, she unleashed her force wave spell. The blast of energy radiated from her and pushed everything away with deadly force. The necromancer was taken by surprised and barely had time to erect his bone armor to shield himself. Although the blast did not physically harm him, the force had thrown him dozens of feet away from his prey. As the force wave dissipated, Cassie felt her mind clearing. Her ploy worked. She had broken the necromancer's spells and pushed him some distance away. Quickly getting her bearings as well as onto her feet, Cassie made a dash towards the exit. The doorway neared. Cassie's hopes began to rise. She just might make it. Just as she was about to dash out, suddenly the ground broke and bones sprang forth. The bones quickly ensnared her and at once she felt her energy draining away. The bones now bound both her arms and legs like chains. She could not move. "Not that easy!" Drakken taunted while laughing and started to walk towards his prey again. This time Cassie was too drained of energy to attempt any more tricks. Drakken stopped right in front of her and grapsed her neck in his hand and lifted her head to face him. "Generations of magical slumber does unpredictable things even to a necromancer like myself," he gloated. "It has whetted my appetite and taste for a female. And you, my dear, is as delicious as they come!" Drakken said sinisterly as he put both his hands on her shoulders, taking a hold of her robe. Just as he was about to rip the clothes off, a crossbow bolt shot past and hit the ground just inches away from Drakken's foot. The bolt crackled menacingly with electricity. "The next one goes straight through your head if you don't step away from the wizard!" a voice echoed around the chamber, it's point of origin unknown. |
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Aug 7 2012, 01:30 PM
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lololol nice, i dont mind btw, just post, kinda busy and out of mood lately, boss kinda hinting that im slow on my job these days
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Aug 7 2012, 04:34 PM
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Wokeh... this part can conclude the first of the short stories if you want it to.. haha..
************* "Ginny!" Cassie thought as she felt Drakken's hands releasing his hold on her robe. Still she was too weak to do anything but feel a bit relieved. Drakken looked up and around the chambers as he backed away from Cassie. The demon hunter had concealed herself well. He could not immediately locate her. "Well, well, well," Drakken said, still trying to find out where the demon hunter was. "Another morsel has offered herself to me." "That remains to be seen," came Ginny's cold reply, whose voice now seems to come from a different location from the first statement. Drakken slowly paced the chamber, searching. "The shadows won't hide you for long huntress," Drakken sneered. Just as the words left his mouth, he suddenly lurched to one side and his hand shot out and grabbed something. Ginny was caught with her neck in the necromancer's grip. He lifted her several inches off the ground. "Hahahaha! What did I tell you?" Drakken laughed. "You should not mess with a necromancer like me!" "Well, you should also know that you should not be in such close contact with a demon hunter!" Ginny retorted amidst gasps and Cassie saw a sudden metallic flash around Ginny's torso. The demon hunter had unleash a fan of blades around her. Drakken howled in pain as a blade sliced into his hand that had been holding Ginny. He released his grip. Although the blades could not penetrate Drakken's body armour, it made him lose his grip on Ginny and that was all she needed. Ginny quickly vaulted over the necromancer, putting herself between him and Cassie and just as quickly she hurled 3 grenades towards Drakken. That made the necromancer jump backwards to avoid the blast. The explosion also raised a thick smoke screen between them. Without missing a beat, Ginny ran towards Cassie, unsheathed her short sword and hacked the chains of bones away. Once the chains were severed, Cassie could feel her strength returning but she was still too weak to run immediately. "C'mon Cassie!" Ginny urged. "We need to get out of here! The smoke won't last long!" she said, propping Cassie's arms across her shoulders and lifting her up to her feet. Drakken's laugh reverberated across the chambers and to the two ladies' horror a huge fiery golem emerged right from the ground at the doorway, blocking their path to freedom. The whole monstrous being was aflame and they could feel the heat from it bearing down at them. The golem roared, shaking the very walls and ground with its intensity. Ginny turned around to look. Her smoke screen is thinning rapidly. She had no doubt that Drakken would emerge from the smoke at any moment. "Damn! What do we do now?" Ginny wondered aloud rather than really asking the question. Their situation was bad and rapidly deteriorating. "Run towards the door!" Cassie said weakly. "What?! Are you crazy? We can't take that golem down!" Ginny objected. "She's right you know," came Drakken's voice throught the thinning smoke. Soon he will be right in front of them. "Trust me!" Cassie said. "And stall Drakken! We have only one shot at this!" With options fast running out, Ginny had no choice but to go with the plan, suicidal as it may seem. "I hope you know what you're doing!" Ginny said. She quickly recited a chant that unleashed a stampede of shadow beasts towards Drakken voice. That will buy them a few precious seconds. Ginny then led Cassie towards the door at a dead run, trying hard to ignore the fact that a flaming golem was in their way. Cassie recited a spell and held out her hand towards the golem. A freeze ray shot from her palm and hit one of the golem's knees. Cassie put all her mana into her spell, increasing the cold blast exponentially. The blast froze a small part of the giant golem's knee. "Shoot at the knee now!" Cassie shouted. Ginny responded by whipping her single handed crossbow out and taking aim. She understood Cassie's plan and they literally have only one shot at it. Steadying her aim as best she can, she fired the bolt along with a muttered prayer. The bolt flew out and rocketed towards its target. Time seemed to slow. The golem lifted its fiery sword over its head and was about to strike at the 2 figure running towards it. One of its knees were frozen but it could still move pretty well. The bolt connected with its target and exploded. The frozen knee shattered, effectively breaking the leg into two and the golem found itself tumbling. Desperately trying to find balance, the golem abandoned its targets. Ginny and Cassie literally ran between the golem's legs as it crashed heavily to the ground behind them. The mass of fire and rock now became a barrier that blocked the doorway as Ginny and Cassie ran through. Their plan succeeded but there was no time to celebrate. The two continued to flee until they were safely out of the cave. They did not stop until the cave was out of sight. Then Cassie collapsed. Her energy all spent. "You came back," Cassie managed weakly as Ginny grabbed her in time to stop her from crashing to the ground. "Couldn't just leave you to that monster back there," Ginny replied. All Cassie could manage was a weak smile before blacking out. *********** For those waiting for a hawt lesbo scene, well... I guess you guys will have to write that yourself... |
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Aug 7 2012, 04:46 PM
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My faith is my shield. My faith is my shield. My faith is my shield.
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Aug 7 2012, 06:06 PM
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AHAHAHHAHA dem, no lesbo scene
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Aug 7 2012, 06:15 PM
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Aug 8 2012, 10:22 AM
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Ok guys.. since you guys have read the opening story I am asking for comments on it.
Pls dun ask for p0rn or similar things ok? I'm not about to write those anytime soon. Sorry guys.. sensous.. I can try but no p0rn. So you guys want it to continue? Any other comments? |
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Aug 8 2012, 10:26 AM
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QUOTE(shootkk @ Aug 8 2012, 10:22 AM) Ok guys.. since you guys have read the opening story I am asking for comments on it. Just keep writing until 28 Aug 2012. Pls dun ask for p0rn or similar things ok? I'm not about to write those anytime soon. Sorry guys.. sensous.. I can try but no p0rn. So you guys want it to continue? Any other comments? I hope to see D3-GW2 hybrid story thereafter. ![]() This post has been edited by ALeUNe: Aug 8 2012, 10:29 AM |
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Aug 8 2012, 10:50 AM
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QUOTE(shootkk @ Aug 8 2012, 10:22 AM) Ok guys.. since you guys have read the opening story I am asking for comments on it. keep writing, i just enjoy reading regardless of content, i kena food poisoning todayPls dun ask for p0rn or similar things ok? I'm not about to write those anytime soon. Sorry guys.. sensous.. I can try but no p0rn. So you guys want it to continue? Any other comments? |
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Aug 8 2012, 02:50 PM
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Ok. I'm gonna start a new chapter. It'll be a bit slow going in the beginning but I hope that you guys will enjoy it nonetheless.
************ No Light Without Darkness Cassie slowly opened her eyes. Soft light filled her sight. As she allowed her eyes to adjust, she felt the softness beneath her. A bed. Slowly she saw the roof over the bed. It was wooden and in fine condition. She must be at a tavern, she surmised. It was bright outside the window. The white translucent curtains drawn across the window filtered the sun and the room was awashed with the soft light. How long has she been unconscious, she wondered. And how did she get here? She let her eyes wander around the room. It was a large room and quite lavishly furnished. Straight across from the foot of the bed was the window. To her left was a dresser with a mirror. Next to the dresser was a door. It was closed. To her right, against the wall was a large wardrobe. Next to the wardrobe was another door, also closed. The bed itself was large and there was only one bed in the room. As she surveyed her surroundings a faint familiar smell caught her attention. With her mind still a little groggy, Cassie was unable to place her finger on it. As the scent carries no hint of danger or threat, she decided to let it slide for now. As she tried to stretch, Cassie felt the silky sheets on her skin. That was when she realized that she was actually naked. The thought jolted her to a sitting position. As the sheets slipped off her smooth skin, she quickly gathered it around her bosom and held it close. "What the hell happened here?" she thought, a little panicky. She ran one hand over her head and felt her long hair loose against her bare shoulders and back. Someone had undressed her. With her anxiety mounting, she took a quick look under the sheets. There was no injuries. No sign of any attack. Her eyes raced across the room, searching but her clothes were nowhere in sight. As Cassie was trying to make sense of her surrounding and condition, the door next to the dresser opened. A woman with pale skin in black, tight figure hugging undergarments walked into the room. She had a towel around her neck and her shoulder length black hair was wet. Just as Cassie was about to ask who the hell she was, the woman saw her sitting up and said, "Oh, so you're finally up. I was wondering how long you'll be out." She then casually sat herself on the dresser and proceeded to dry her hair with the towel. Cassie blinked and stared at this woman silently. Somehow her voice was familiar. She was slender, athletically built and curvaceous. It took a while but finally Cassie's mind started to register the voice and the smell. "Ginny?" she ventured hesistantly. The woman turned to look at her with a puzzled look. "What?" she replied. "You don't recognize me? And to think I had to drag you all the way here from where you passed out," she continued on with an annoyed tone of voice. Cassie blinked some more. "Well, to be honest you looked kinda different without your armor," Cassie admitted. "Uhmmm... I am naked..." Cassie said slowly. "Your clothes are in the wardrobe," Ginny replied nonchalantly, still drying her hair. "You're quite heavy for your size you know. I nearly gave up and just let you drown in the tub." "You mean you bathed me?!" Cassie asked shocked. "While I was out cold?!" "No. I just let the men in the tavern have their fun with you," Ginny replied in jest. When she heard no reply coming back, she turned to face Cassie and found her sitting there with her mouth hanging open staring blankly back at her. "Oh, for heavens sake! Of course I bathed you! Couldn't let you on the same bed with me with all those awful smells on you, now could I?" Cassie's mouth dropped open wider. Ginny didn't think it was possible. Cassie turned to the empty space beside her on the bed and then back to Ginny. The look of shock still on her face. "You mean we slept together?!" Cassie asked incredulously. "Well, there's only one bed," Ginny replied and headed over to the wardrobe to get dressed. "Get over it. It's not like you were a good bedfellow anyway. You were out cold for 2 days straight!" "You... me.." Cassie stammered, her face all red from blushing and embarassment. Ginny sighed. She grabbed Cassie's robe from the wardrobe and threw in onto the bed. She finshed dressing and walked towards the other door. Just as she was was about to open it she turned to Cassie and said slowly, "Nothing happened, ok?" With that she opened the door, walked out and closed it behind her. |
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