My Short Stories / Fanfic, feel free to post your own here too
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 Aug 7 2012, 06:15 PM
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QUOTE(The Amateur Working Bee @ Aug 7 2012, 06:06 PM) AHAHAHHAHA dem, no lesbo scene Hmm nearly had a bondage scene tough... ah well....drakken..really from Harry Potter's fame? Oh wait that was drako.... |
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Aug 12 2012, 02:52 PM
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QUOTE(The Amateur Working Bee @ Aug 12 2012, 12:32 PM) dah agak dahhhh Keep it up guys got talent yo |
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Aug 13 2012, 01:47 PM
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QUOTE(shootkk @ Aug 13 2012, 01:41 PM) LOL! I know lah it's not LoTR.... if it was anywhere even remotely near that level of standard I would be charging you guys for reading it! I have to chip in. I am a big fan of LotR...Tolkien is just mind blowing....a real fantasy world ....EPIC. Thanks for the review. At least I know someone thinks it's ok. Haha. If not I just syoik sendiri.. As for the terms and all, well I'm catering for those who have little exposure to D3.. and as for the mother appearing.. it's call an 'applied phlebotinum' meaning I just pull something out of thin air and put that in. It's fiction so anything can happen.. LOL  More battle description and fanservice? ... OK.. Noted! Your is pretty good. I sense your write similarly with D.Eddings style..just minus the dry humour. Would be better if you had add a bit of dry humour into it..  .Othwise, I second Bee...A+ for effort...B for the stroyline. but A+++ for making it free to view..  |
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