my oc yami

its late now an im sleepy so just do a few heavy thick line art
maybe soon ill finish it,

feed back on her post please, is there anything off

thanks

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I dont see that as problem though. Her head tilted a bit to her left.

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my instinct tell me should be this small. 
unless you are doing realism style.

and oh ya, the left hand Knuckle's joint shouldn't so visible for agirl unless you are doing a manly girl.

Not really. The hands are too big for woman anatomy, unless you're drawing crossdressing man or a fat women.
If you want to draw a muscular woman, that's not the right way. You're just making the hands big instead of drawing (bulging) muscles.
I don't know whether it is only me or the right hand is too long, to be exact, the distance between shoulder to elbow is a bit unnatural.
Yeah, the ear kinda weird too.

This is anime drawing though, but refer to the hands. That's how women's muscular hand looks like in semi-realism.

Tracing YUI's pictures is part of my self-training to improve my drawings in semi and full-realism. 
Well, until these time I've been drawing all that cartoon, anime and manga stuff so I should learn on drawing that realism stuff as well.

I've got no problem with you actually. You post your drawings here to gain C&C, so I should do some C&C from what I could observe.
Instead of getting pissed off by C&C from people like me, why shouldn't you take these stuff to improve your skills?
Start by drawing guidelines as it can reduce the flaws in your drawings or sketches.

Also I got no time to post my works as now I'm busy with more important stuff. Yes. University (government) is starting new semester next week, and I need to prepare my things. 

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the fishes by Ben? 

well here..
anyway the hidung looks uhh weird  
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nah, proper a bit shading does affect much XD
i m not good yet.

and if you are lazy do detail what for go realism lol.
and i think you go trace photo first, or use a photo do a "paint over" to understand the flow.

i also need do that...just  i also lazy 

Lunch time fast sketch.   
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akuma is my favourite but surviving rate is very low compare i using incomplete hakan in SSFIVAE.

and about your Asuka test plugsuit semi-realism...the cloth fold need more accurate and shade too...body proportion need strengthen XD

i have diarrhea today and my anus is bleeding.
i guess eat too much petai.

mmm seriusly your style is almost near Puyuh @ Leong wan kok
im just sayin
but still love your doodles mang

hue hue hue both is good peoples

puyuh very grungy2 textured look wan , shiok anthropomorphic characters also. me trying to get away from emulating oils wan , wan emulate tis :

http://ecartez-vous-jarrive.blogspot.com/

me wanted to use tis instead for the smallkid book projek but my cikgu say cannot .  donno y huehuehue

unf, sometimes I feel a bit awkward working in an art style that is different from the norm >_<

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Are u working as an artist?What is your job actually,please answer,dont left me hanging.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 16 2011, 12:19 PM

once again working as artist or not doesnt means you can draw better or not, my group just have a good artist and she still studying non-art related stuff.

just choose the major you like to study, and drawing as a hobby or tools of living. your choice.

i does working as a designer, but non of my anime style stuff is in there.

sorry for being out of topic awhile but i just want to say here. hope no offense @_@"

i'm in a doujin circle group and plan to release our first art book. the title will be '1/2 Human'. while the members seem to be busy/didnt get ideas what to draw, so i'm trying to find a few guest artist to join if any willing. let just say there is no payment for this but i will be giving a copy of that book to you if you want to join in.

do ignore this if you find it not in your interest >_<" as it is like no benefits much except a free copy =X. i actually plan to make a little payment (very little to you as most of you are at professional rate) as well but only after i get back my cost. though this is a first attempt so i not sure if i able to even get back the cost so fast or maybe didnt get at all. thats why i must assume there is no payment i can give for now >_<

anything to your wild imagination, that is in the '1/2 human' concept. means anything that looks like human but actually not human. xD example mermaid, taurus, elf, the 12 zodiac, myth, or any anime/manga/virtual/original character that is in that concept like flandre scarlet (touhou), vocaloid (not human but most people might look it as human so need to do something to make it look like not, example with wires plug or something) and so on.

i'm not being very particular on your concept as long it is 1/2 human but QC still applies of coz xD if want more example, agito have made some sketch. not sure he post here before or not though @_@

A4 size, 300 dpi.. er not sure what else. psd, pdf, tiff or any format that is appropriate no gif, jpg of coz xD