Done.



This post has been edited by LeechFever: Sep 11 2011, 10:46 AM

nice touch
the added cape are awesome, aw man i should have added it earlier dam that perfect

epic armor BTW

sorry for my dull sketch hahahahah >_<

a good reference for you

@o@
no one is bother to comment the nose of my drawing..i need help someone repair nose from that angle

not only nose need to fix oh, it whole picture need to fix oh

this is i follow your angle and my style la, the nose of course simplified a lot.
i cincai do one got many place is not solid one haahhaha

tutorial might help you
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=nose%20tut...rder=9&offset=0

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 11 2011, 08:02 PM

I think the nose is okay,no need to worry about it,just the line work and the shading is wrong.
Agito's idea of changing the drawing to his own preference is not good,it neglected the original artist's way of drawing.
I mean thats not anime.Try to work on the line at the nose part.
To spice up ur drawing,add more details on the eyes and the lips,also the necklace.

ooo..
but ur version kinda anime right? i like it..but i cant really draw the anime..
anyway soo thats how the nose look eh.. sankiu..

yea i kinda lazy to draw all Details..
i need to change my lazy attitude tho..

thanks all for commenting..

this one i tidak membantah
but then if wan fix it, really need goes a lot fixing...
well now i point some thing wrong there har...

@sai91
1) eyes, looks like a half open eyes. usually saw in buddha statue only. those eyes giving a calm/dead/not energic feel. so kinda weird to put on ah moi there.
2) hair... err not sure is your style or what... because on top part of hair looks suitable for short hair but you draw a long one so it giving a messed up hair style. and ya shading need put a lot effort,
3) shading, same with above, it does ruin a lot your image. a wrong shading will affect a lot. so ya accurate shading does help a lot.
4) lines, shaking lines....
5) neck, not sure the shading ruin it or what, it does giving a fat neck for me XD
6) lips. need more "roundish" edge a bit and ya SHADING again to make it more sexy

hell..thats alot of work to do..
well at least i learning b4 i go study..
and yea..the hair mmg like that one..

nah, proper a bit shading does affect much XD
i m not good yet.

and if you are lazy do detail what for go realism lol.
and i think you go trace photo first, or use a photo do a "paint over" to understand the flow.

i also need do that...just i also lazy

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 11 2011, 10:52 PM

The only thing Im not lazy when doing it is drawing,I can waste alot of times when doing it,it is so fun.
Other than that,I am lazy,Im a lazyass,study also lazy.

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Added on September 11, 2011, 10:56 pmThat what I was talking about,props to you.

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Sep 11 2011, 10:56 PM

O: thats alot of difference..
and she look skinny now..
and i think thats the best way tho..

i think when im serious im goona just remove the laziness in me..

got the feel the need to colour my work since leechfever colour it

change the face
new hand post
more skimpy outfit ~!
quick skin shade
i do some mistake doing it so i readjust her boobs
and got a few more mistake, hopefully no one notice

ori size below



This post has been edited by Dreadlock13: Sep 12 2011, 10:42 AM


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here's what i think and what i could offer my advice to you
no offense seriously
dont do fan art for now
you need to learn how to sketch and draw the proper way before you go for any stylized method
skulls-you need to draw alot of them
front side back top
understand how one face structure works
nose ear mouth eye
individually practice on them
no fancy angle of your artwork for now
it might be boring at 1st,but believe me when the result come out
you'll be satisfied

ya, even now i does actually do standing-straight-pre-set-pose almost all the time XD

thats why i see when sai91 do that
long term it's not gonna do him any good
i wouldnt say im good
but if one have to train,train it the proper way

he can start lazy

soon if he want to improve he realize that lazy will not do him any good

but with the experience he have during that lazy time will help him

but again only time will tell

just dont get into hiatus mode

lol dont let that habit get into you
i've walk through that road before

duno why i still perfer the first doodle of you....the black and white one...got more "feel"