hi.
my group finish the website already.
we make a account where user can manage their event,latest news,and inquiry email.
i just want to know how much it worth.thanks.

previous website http://aerotree.com.my/

new website link http://fadrizul.aist.com.my/aerotree/



This post has been edited by maryjane9996: Jul 17 2009, 11:41 PM

the new 1 is dammm nice....

new 1 is better... but why use raptor? i think not so suitable lah.. try another plane

Great design. If there's anything that I can comment on, it would be the colour of the tagline "Nurturing Your Fleet" and other texts.

Consider changing the colour of your tagline, especially the end of 'nurturing' and beginning of 'your' there. The white colour makes it not quite readable.

Other content texts are quite small and cluttered. Do consider to make the font bigger, or increase the line spacing, or increase the character spacing to make the contents easier to read. The page in the mockup doesn't have much contents, therefore I think you can generously use bigger fonts. Being a reader, I find myself not quite interested in reading the contents, probably because they are not easy to read. You also may highlight the keywords in the texts to help reading.

1. You may want to make the menu a little more obvious - try same text size as the logo.

2. As much as Malaysian's dislike the idea of their website being too textie, it's a key to basic SEO. So fill up the services description.

Overall, the new layout definitely improves the current in terms of structure and clarity.

I wonder what's with the army these days. They all want to renew their website. Just recently I got an army enquiry too. Now waiting on their response.

overall it is pretty neat n clean. i have a few suggestion for this design.

1. the main navi need to be more obvious, currently it looks like some random floating text. maybe add an icon/bullet in front of each text will be good
2. the plane is a bit too close to the main navi, maybe shift it a bit or make it smaller. personally i prefer a bright blue sky than sunset for this design. blue sky (with some cloud) will make it looks much positive and it suites the font colour
3. i saw the paper texture for the content area, but the tear edges doesnt seems nice cos the rest of the design is more towards "clean and neat". maybe a clean cut paper will be better?
4. the text "nurturing..." gradient is a bit weird, maybe use blue >> slightly darker blue or white >> light grey and some subtle drop shadow.

nice effort, hope my suggestion will helps.

thanks for the comment..

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Added on May 19, 2009, 11:19 pmim going to use Sukhoi to represent Malaysia air force.
thanks.

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Added on May 19, 2009, 11:21 pmwah,thanks for all your feedback bro,hehe..will work on that.

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Added on May 19, 2009, 11:23 pm1.yeah,copied that!
2.Can u explain the basic SEO ? Im new with this thing. Thanks.

Hope they call u soon,haha..Its time to change la bro.

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Added on May 19, 2009, 11:25 pmthanks bro,will post the new layout after finish.
we also working on the 2nd and 3rd option for customer to choose.

This post has been edited by maryjane9996: May 19 2009, 11:25 PM

wow.. great design wor..
keep up with the good work

Wow, the new one is obviously better T_T The old one has terrible use of space.

thanks guys your support and comment.

Every website designer/developer needs to know about basic SEO. And to know about the basics isn't difficult. Just do a bit more reading in your own time. Anyway, basics normally encompass:

1. Titles
2. META (don't ask - go Google)
3. Semantic (method of coding)
4. Image alernatives
5. Content

The design definitely better thn the previous.. but some how the color seem not stand out enough.

The menu button need to work something out...

the design is very derivative. by that i mean it's dime a dozen and i've seen hundreds of such design latyout out there.

but i guess for a company such as this one originality is not much of an issue

i give it a 6/10. good execution but lacks originality

you dont need originality in most cases.

i give it a 6/10, design can be improved. im not going to explain it all here, you have to take a design course to understand.

The site looks cool with a black background.

My 2 cents is, how do you plan to market this website for them?

how much you charge this designed? Look like old bit designed.

i can guarantee you mine 100% original.
We start from scratch.
Maybe coincidentally same with others.

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Added on May 21, 2009, 12:27 amThanks for your opinion.
What do you mean by marketing this website ?
price ?

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Added on May 21, 2009, 12:28 amactually,we going to ask 10k.
but since we will give another 2 option,
i will ask 15k roughly.


This post has been edited by maryjane9996: May 21 2009, 12:28 AM

yes it is original. all i am saying is the layout i.e big main page on top followed by 3 small link using JPG hve been done to death. i didn't say you copied the design. sorry if that's the impression you got from my post.

look like you lucky can earn many for this customer!

do you mean im not eligible to earn money with that kind of website?

10k??? got CMS and database everything ka? damn syok to get gov job like this...

The raptor looks 3Dish, abit like a toy model instead of a real deal. Besides that u might 1 2 change the sky to a blue 1. It will increase the color contrast and make the site more striking. Besides tht, u can change the ground to black and lose the texture. Looks abit wierd. Layout wise is simple and easy to follow.

that is my view to your designed. all forum review just can take as heard only. Don't used as for you review. Because we don't know your service and offer to your customer.

ouh..no offence bro,but im just wondering why u said so ?
mind to clarify it ? Im positive thinker here, and i can improve my self
and my group with all your comment.

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Added on May 21, 2009, 4:24 pmIts not from gov,its for local company which doing business with RMAF.

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Added on May 21, 2009, 4:25 pmThanks bro,comment the 2nd and 3rd option.

This post has been edited by maryjane9996: May 21 2009, 04:25 PM

i tot my uncle dont wanna update his website anymore..haha

at least better than b4..
since the website isnt updated for quite some time...

=_=

This post has been edited by iena_jr: Jun 1 2009, 09:19 PM

Has the client confirmed the design already? Or, you still doing concepts for them?

new updates..

i like the third one. thats my kinda design..

damn nice............

u r doing better! i'll choose the 3rd one. maybe can tone down / remove the "shadow" border in the content area.

This post has been edited by B-Mecha: Jun 4 2009, 03:59 PM

Your uncle ?
name ?
he work for Aerotree ?

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Added on June 9, 2009, 4:39 pmconfirm d,but they ask me to gv some option for them.
will present this website tomorrow.

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Added on June 9, 2009, 4:40 pmthanks,but i like the 2nd one.hehe.
everybody taste,just let them decide.
most important i deliver what they want.

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Added on June 9, 2009, 4:41 pmthanks for the comment bro.
actually they ask me to use the company jet.
my group change it already.will update tonight.

This post has been edited by maryjane9996: Jun 9 2009, 04:41 PM

I know the MD.. a friend of my father..
I'm not really good at giving comments.. but I like the latest one..
All the best dude

so u know Dato' Halim bin Othman ?
whats your father name ?what company,maybe i know u.

my grandpa...

lol~

yes.. my father is Ismail Omar.. company Ikramatic Systems Sdn Bhd.. don't think u know me Im just a son..

already stated above

I hope you update us on what's the outcome and the comments they'll give later.

I dunno but I dun really prefer something when the website is on left, then suddenly shift to center on another page

Hi.yesterday presentation goes very well.
They choose the first option instead of 2 and 3.
Well,up to them. ^^

here their comment:-

Comment on third option is the logo not very striking since the background color almost the same with the logo.
and text under NURTURING YOUR FLEET is hard to read,because of the background color.
and too many space in white color make it look boring. ^^

for 2nd option,they said the logo on the top right hand side too small for user too see.i said in my heart (yala,that is is the logo only,that is y small.) @@
and they don't like the color.

1st option,they like the color tone,easier to read,sharp,and nice.
Plus they asked me to make a flash the plane come from back towards the user toeing a target and a missile will be launch out from nowhere and hit the target.coz this reflect what business they doing now.

so that's it,plus im going to add map, and site map.
now our will working on the coding and will present again.
will keep you all update k.

overall, design is ok...but abit template-based feel.

LOL! The flash animation is a common request. Should've tried talking them out of it. LOL!

actually i do,but a simple one la.
just the aircraft come from left and stop at right hand side.
but they ask someting that reflect their project.
ok la,i just deliver what they want. @@



This post has been edited by maryjane9996: Jul 17 2009, 11:43 PM

how much the market price for this website ? thanks

refer http://forum.lowyat.net/topic/301799