overall it is pretty neat n clean. i have a few suggestion for this design.

1. the main navi need to be more obvious, currently it looks like some random floating text. maybe add an icon/bullet in front of each text will be good
2. the plane is a bit too close to the main navi, maybe shift it a bit or make it smaller. personally i prefer a bright blue sky than sunset for this design. blue sky (with some cloud) will make it looks much positive and it suites the font colour
3. i saw the paper texture for the content area, but the tear edges doesnt seems nice cos the rest of the design is more towards "clean and neat". maybe a clean cut paper will be better?
4. the text "nurturing..." gradient is a bit weird, maybe use blue >> slightly darker blue or white >> light grey and some subtle drop shadow.

nice effort, hope my suggestion will helps.

u r doing better! i'll choose the 3rd one. maybe can tone down / remove the "shadow" border in the content area.

This post has been edited by B-Mecha: Jun 4 2009, 03:59 PM