Shots were shot by kitlens+55-200mm+50mm f1.8 (MF)
This is my 2nd model shoot. I still have a lot to learn. Please do give some guidance

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orenzai

This post has been edited by orenzai: Jan 19 2009, 10:01 PM

Hi ..
The sisters are pretty. But may i humbly ask; were they prepped for these shots ?

This post has been edited by the_tranny: Jan 19 2009, 11:29 PM

orenzai: u can do better than that, shots were underexpose on my screen.

need more bokeh on the photos

ready? not quite coz they are my friends workers. so they just come reluctantly
yeah now posted up looks underexposed. lol. thanks for pointing it out

Haha so the sisters were not really "there" in a sense
I guess you couldve done better (paraphrasing Mr Pang). Maybe you could get the sisters to wear something nicer next session. Or makeup.

This post has been edited by the_tranny: Jan 20 2009, 12:17 AM

now that you've mentioned it, they do look a little irritated/unhappy in the pics, imho @.@

oh orenzai.. u go makan sorang ka? next time bring me la..

you fly to Kuching, Sarawak to join him ok

Knowing bunvirus... he'll probably go...

I only found pic 1 & 3 to be acceptable in modest way although there is alot of room for improvement. The rest does dont work, some are merely snapshots.

Like what Vince mentioned, your pics will work well with stronger bokeh else it looks like its taken by normal digicam.

yeah they were actually quite irritated. haha. so i tot of using that as a mood. but guess it didnt work out. i didnt even know WHO was my model before going

i nvr knew you were from kuching?

thanks for the advice. honestly i also haven found a shot that are nice. just these ones are more acceptable thanks again i will focus on the bokeh more nex time

You got alot more to improve man

just feel that the model kinda akward..not so natural