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TSorenzai
post Jan 19 2009, 10:00 PM, updated 17y ago

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Shots were shot by kitlens+55-200mm+50mm f1.8 (MF) sad.gif
This is my 2nd model shoot. I still have a lot to learn. Please do give some guidance

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This post has been edited by orenzai: Jan 19 2009, 10:01 PM
TSorenzai
post Jan 20 2009, 12:02 AM

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QUOTE(the_tranny @ Jan 19 2009, 11:28 PM)
Hi ..
The sisters are pretty. But may i humbly ask; were they prepped for these shots ?
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ready? not quite tongue.gif coz they are my friends workers. so they just come reluctantly biggrin.gif
QUOTE(Vincent Pang @ Jan 19 2009, 11:38 PM)
orenzai: u can do better than that, shots were underexpose on my screen.

need more bokeh on the photos
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yeah now posted up looks underexposed. lol. thanks for pointing it out notworthy.gif
TSorenzai
post Jan 20 2009, 10:37 PM

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QUOTE(the_tranny @ Jan 20 2009, 12:17 AM)
Haha so the sisters were not really "there" in a sense smile.gif
I guess you couldve done better (paraphrasing Mr Pang). Maybe you could get the sisters to wear something nicer next session. Or makeup.
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QUOTE(Freezefrost @ Jan 20 2009, 08:37 AM)
now that you've mentioned it, they do look a little irritated/unhappy in the pics, imho @.@
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nod.gif yeah they were actually quite irritated. haha. so i tot of using that as a mood. but guess it didnt work out. i didnt even know WHO was my model before going blush.gif

QUOTE(bunvirus @ Jan 20 2009, 10:26 AM)
oh orenzai.. u go makan sorang ka? next time bring me la..
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i nvr knew you were from kuching?

QUOTE(travis_ckf @ Jan 20 2009, 05:29 PM)
I only found pic 1 & 3 to be acceptable in modest way although there is alot of room for improvement. The rest does dont work, some are merely snapshots.

Like what Vince mentioned, your pics will work well with stronger bokeh else it looks like its taken by normal digicam.
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nod.gif thanks for the advice. honestly i also haven found a shot that are nice. just these ones are more acceptable smile.gif thanks again i will focus on the bokeh more nex time

 

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