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TSR a D ! c 4 L
post Apr 8 2008, 12:09 PM, updated 18y ago

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yep you heard me. 1st time, and i really got the lighting really really bad sweat.gif need to practice more... Thanks to a friend who's willing to donate his car to be the model laugh.gif

The results based on my liking.
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post Apr 8 2008, 12:15 PM

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Nice try on the lighting... I see that it's similar to cooleur's shot? Got the idea from his pictures?
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post Apr 8 2008, 12:16 PM

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thanks smile.gif

nope, didnt follow him, like i mentioned. The editing is based on my liking smile.gif
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post Apr 8 2008, 12:28 PM

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love the color of the skies!

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the subject to me is placed awkwardly, if you placed it in the middle
or the the right it'll look better imo. and if you darkned the background
like silhoutte it'll be awesome! and yeah the lighting looks awkward too.
my honest opnion bro radical notworthy.gif

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post Apr 8 2008, 02:02 PM

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This is not a bad attempt actually! It looks like those car catalogues, but my comment is try avoid those lighting on the lower side of the road coz it doesnt looked real. I would like to see if the car is in motion, but overall, good attempt!
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post Apr 8 2008, 02:16 PM

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woooo, wat kind of lighting ur usin?
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post Apr 8 2008, 03:58 PM

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whoa.. nice attempt. smile.gif combination of the sky and the lighting is good to my liking. however, imho it'll be better if u can light up the side as well (to avoid the shadows abit) and seems like some color fringes around the trees.. but anyway, its a real goood try.. wink.gif
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post Apr 8 2008, 04:15 PM

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yeppers. u missed out the rims dude. the rims should be one of the main higlights of the car. more light there would be great. biggrin.gif
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post Apr 8 2008, 04:20 PM

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i think.. hide his platnumber also la..
later people go find his car how?

btw... ur picture looks SUPERB..
i like it.. can give me one on one training on how to do so?
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post Apr 8 2008, 06:34 PM

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hm...thats something weird in this photo...how to put it, the car surface is not smooth..and the way of lighting has turned the vehicle out of shape. got those horror movie effect if u know what i mean, light comes from bottom to top..

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post Apr 8 2008, 07:03 PM

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good skies, but too much "3d" of the car
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post Apr 8 2008, 08:50 PM

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QUOTE(tongyam @ Apr 8 2008, 07:03 PM)
good skies, but too much "3d" of the car
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seriously i dont get you sweat.gif

like this i also wanna do on my audi a4 lah brows.gif
before i sell mine off laugh.gif

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post Apr 8 2008, 08:53 PM

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QUOTE(MR.Shiney @ Apr 8 2008, 08:50 PM)
seriously i dont get you sweat.gif

like this i also wanna do on my audi a4 lah brows.gif
before i sell mine off laugh.gif
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er....shadow gua...i dono the term how to say la sweat.gif sweat.gif
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post Apr 8 2008, 10:08 PM

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wah.. HDR + CLS. lol.. very nice sky tinting. is it originally like that?

u would want to go to putrajaya during dawn. the sky is just awesome there. as seen in my picture in TheVOIP's photo contest

p/s: i'm on drug right now, i'm sorry if u dont comprehend my comments
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post Apr 8 2008, 10:22 PM

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QUOTE(MR.Shiney @ Apr 8 2008, 12:28 PM)
love the color of the skies!

feedback section laugh.gif
the subject to me is placed awkwardly, if you placed it in the middle
or the the right it'll look better imo. and if you darkned the background
like silhoutte it'll be awesome! and yeah the lighting looks awkward too.
my honest opnion bro radical notworthy.gif
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Thanks for your feedback. Well, i have to agree on the darkening of the background silhouette part. Now it somehows distracts me from the ride biggrin.gif


QUOTE(travis_ckf @ Apr 8 2008, 02:02 PM)
This is not a bad attempt actually! It looks like those car catalogues, but my comment is try avoid those lighting on the lower side of the road coz it doesnt looked real. I would like to see if the car is in motion, but overall, good attempt!
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Yeah =/ my lighting still not good enough, i shud have used reflectors instead haha cuz if i used flash it sure will leave a "hot spot" on the rims.

QUOTE(aka_kepep @ Apr 8 2008, 02:16 PM)
woooo, wat kind of lighting ur usin?
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er... 2 580EXII and 1 430EX i think sweat.gif


QUOTE(kord @ Apr 8 2008, 03:58 PM)
whoa.. nice attempt. smile.gif combination of the sky and the lighting is good to my liking. however, imho it'll be better if u can light up the side as well (to avoid the shadows abit) and seems like some color fringes around the trees.. but anyway, its a real goood try.. wink.gif
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I get u smile.gif still have alot to learn with the lighting.


QUOTE(' or 1=1 -- @ Apr 8 2008, 04:15 PM)
yeppers. u missed out the rims dude. the rims should be one of the main higlights of the car. more light there would be great. biggrin.gif
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Like i said, my lighting skills still not good XD will do better on my nx attempt!


QUOTE(bunvirus @ Apr 8 2008, 04:20 PM)
i think.. hide his platnumber also la..
later people go find his car how?

btw... ur picture looks SUPERB..
i like it.. can give me one on one training on how to do so?
tongue.gif cheers
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no need la lolz

on the training part im still new, this is my 1st attempt with Derek so there's nothing much to teach, all i have to say now is just trial and errors man smile.gif

QUOTE(eddychstu @ Apr 8 2008, 06:34 PM)
hm...thats something weird in this photo...how to put it, the car surface is not smooth..and the way of lighting has turned the vehicle out of shape. got those horror movie effect if u know what i mean, light comes from bottom to top..
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I think the not so smooth surface is because of the noise haha... I still dont get u on the horror feel part XD Top is the backlight from the ambient ma(the sun) hehe... others are flash.

QUOTE(tongyam @ Apr 8 2008, 07:03 PM)
good skies, but too much "3d" of the car
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QUOTE(tongyam @ Apr 8 2008, 08:53 PM)
er....shadow gua...i dono the term how to say la sweat.gif  sweat.gif
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3D ur head

If dont know how to say then just keep it to yourself cuz your posts are like 1 liners only its misleading. dry.gif sighs, told u alot of times already


QUOTE(dgrebel @ Apr 8 2008, 10:08 PM)
wah.. HDR + CLS. lol.. very nice sky tinting. is it originally like that?

u would want to go to putrajaya during dawn. the sky is just awesome there. as seen in my picture in TheVOIP's photo contest

p/s: i'm on drug right now, i'm sorry if u dont comprehend my comments
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I dont wanna go there cuz too many ppl used that spot liao, so its a no no. Maybe ill go there but i will look for a better spot hahahaha
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post Apr 8 2008, 10:26 PM

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wtf damn nice weyh!


Added on April 8, 2008, 10:27 pmbut sumthing lari abit...the right tree..like one side dark..then after the tree terus bright..like tak matching

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post Apr 8 2008, 10:28 PM

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soli lor. my wrong again sad.gif
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post Apr 8 2008, 10:31 PM

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yea but i think thats got more to do with photomatix's buggy processing than his pp skills. but i have to say the composition is near if not perfect d *negative space on the right hand side biggrin.gif
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post Apr 8 2008, 10:34 PM

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but the pix damn syiok nonetherless..

i really like the colors
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post Apr 8 2008, 10:43 PM

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eh luke, it actually depends on what kind of feeling you wan to portrait to the viewer. but i'd say this type of appearance is non-commercial type of attempt smile.gif

next time got shoot call me la, live so near only...hehe


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