i dont mean to discourage, but i have to agree with everdying
(ive heard the first song only)

hmm.... ok.... i dun like the 1st song either....

downloading the 2nd..... see if it's better....

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Added on November 21, 2007, 9:07 pmhmm..... n i dun like the 2nd song oso. =.=

This post has been edited by enteryourusername: Nov 21 2007, 09:07 PM

TS, I think your songs have potential. The vocals need a little work though... did ya sing while playing guitar? Polish your pitching, dynamics and breathing techniques... as advance as technology could be, there're certain things you can't mask.

I like the production even though it's amateurish, did ya record everything by yourself? I see that you have used some vocal effects such as double tracking (?)...

I won't comment on the songwriting as it's pretty subjective but your tunes definitely could be moulded into complete songs. Keep writing and improving.

add on to that, the arrangements of instruments could very much be improved.