QUOTE(luckyMan99 @ Apr 26 2023, 11:58 AM)
only watched the first video.
from what I can see, u did not express your own opinion enough. you are like Chatgpt stating obvious facts.
For example, we all know that insurance is important, but as a fresh grad, why should I pay RM200-300 monthly instead of buying a new iPhone? You can't convince people if all you do is state some facts that we can get from an insurance agent. Give some controversial opinion like 'tiktok is for kids' or 'people who buy latest phone is insecure kid who need attention' , then you can generate comments and views will follow.
and you need clickbait title
ok I try. I scared do controversial opinion just for views... I'm generally not that type of person. But i acknowledge that is a legitimate strategy to get viewership. I just don't know if I want to be that type of controversial person though...
QUOTE(Sha91 @ Apr 26 2023, 12:06 PM)
From a nerdy point of view, your videos are okay. Because you use proper BM, full sentence with minor grammar and not some rempit BM.
I am a textbook person so I can finish watching your videos without being bored.
If your target is youngsters, you need to go down to their language (don't mistaken it as rempit language), give examples that suit their levels. Use conversational language, imagine you are talking to someone about financial (maybe try to record your voice when you are giving your advice to someone), then your video will be very engaging as if you are talking to me one to one.
Good feedback. I'll take note and try on future videos.