protip: make a one-liner description of your game. if it's not interesting enough for a one-liner, it's gonna be hard to be interesting later.

It's a series, so some will be PC, some will be mobile.


Right, I concur.

"A long saga of epic romance and heroism, that tells the stories of reconciliation amongst everyone."

that means absolutely nothing. at least let your audience has some ideas about what kinda game to expect.

Example:
https://helixabyss.itch.io/ellapse
Ellapse is a journey through a surreal, dream-like world where decisions have consequences and the line between close friends and enemies is hard to find.

So, uh, is my one liner acceptable or not??
Just looking to your example makes me realise that my vocab has gone rusty ..

Couldn't be further from the truth, thanks for the advice

Friends, I would like to hear your thoughts on the concepts of the classes in this game, and the entertainmentability and playability of this game?

Actually, it has been overhauled.

The OP will be renamed to Young Braves of Meridien and story will be changed. But I cannot do it now as I'm still probation.

I agree, I should keep it as simple as possible considering it's my first serious game.

Here's my blogpost on my Kingdoms, Heroes, Dragons and Romance saga:

https://sensayshone.blogspot.com/p/kingdoms...omance.html?m=1

I'm going to develop this saga as long as I live.
I'm that dead serious

https://sensayshone.blogspot.com/p/kingdoms...omance.html?m=1

Storyline Entry has been changed:

The story of Young Braves of Meridien is briefly as followed:

Navigate through Christan Lulian Lowa who works as mercenary in order to fund his younger sister's, Christella Lilian Lowa, study and training in a prestigious Garden Battlers Academy. Help bring the Graveyard Warlock to justice, push back the Saberogue pirates, travel as research aide for Professor Shirin, conquer all the 19 Dojos around the continent of Afrorika in Meridien, solves many riddles of the Meridien lores, join the Adventurers Guild and try to reach the Paragon Rank, all the while trying to find their missing parents Chrossant Leonus Lowa, and Luxraeh Vellarennia Ursohla.

Flaring Stars will be a thousand-pages novel.
Wishing Mooncheers will be a motion graphic video story.
And Princess in Dazzling Armour and Knight in Radiant Gi will be a full coloured manga.

This post has been edited by ProSuperSchool: Mar 8 2022, 01:18 PM

Also, since it is related to my game making experience, I would like to share here, I happened to stumble a upon a method, when I couldn't run my RPG Maker software on Netbook due to limited screen resolution choices.

You can see how to add more screen resolution on your netbook in the following link:

https://www.lifewire.com/how-to-change-your...olution-2377863

Okay I missed your Itch.io link, that site has tons of indie games example, thank you for reminding me about it.

okay I misread it. Lemme try rephrasing the oneliner

"A long saga of epic sci fi and fantasy, set in Cosmothronedear multiverses setting, and driven by romance and heroism, this saga tells fantastical stories of reconciliation amongst everyone, as everyone fight for conquest or fight for each other."

try something simple and direct first, then improve from there
example
"A sci-fi roguelike game mixed with love and conquest between timelines, driven by romance and heroism"

although heroism and conquest might not mix well together I think, but hey at least it'll pique interest

Holy sheezz, I like yours one much better! Thank you, sensei, may I use it?? XD

I'll give you my thoughts..

1.) You don't have RACE category. Your race is like all over the place. No Category to sub-category. Half of the race is unknown since no description of it's appearance. Is it a Beastmen race ?

2.) No Lore and History behind each RACE since GOD & Deity is involved.

3.) Android is involve so what time period was the High technology began ? Could it be = normal tech land after 1000years become advance then shithappens in timespace which cause myth creature to appear like that manhwa comic solo leveling and etc ?

4.) Try to make game part of the game on certain periods. To intro us to the game like the movies.. Eg// Lord of the Rings.. star wars that story was like somewhere middle after cataclysmic event.

5.) Is that game like JRPG turn base or Open world RPG ? or is it like Zelda : Link to the past type ?

I still slowly update the OS. But thanks for pointing them out, you helped me make my Game Design Document more organised. I will address them, pls stay tuned

5. Open ended linearity RPG with three turn based battle system and one fighting battle system

4. Yep that's what I'm planning to do.

1 and 2 I will address.

For no 3, after I release a demo, hopefully before May this year, you will find out.

So..uh, play and find out (PAFO)

pakai je. roguelike is only because i have no idea what kinda game this is, so just guessing. but you can pause with other work for now.

make a one-liner pitch.
a 30 second pitch
a 3 minute pitch
a 10 minute pitch

then you can see if your idea, game mechanics, design, levels, etc. tell EVERYTHING, even ending in your pitch.

this is a far, far more important skill to learn than concepts etc. you have everything in your mind, but putting it down for 3 minute's worth of words is very, very difficult. but if you can, and in 10 mins you can present your pitch in a very solid explanation, you're 75% through grant funding edi.

Affirmatively understood.

You can start with episode or part 1, trying to finish all of it will take a long time. The prologue can be a good start.

Can it be done if the game is open world adventure RPG??

Also, since you mentioned tackling this game in parts/episodes, you may read some info of this series on my blog.

https://sensayshone.blogspot.com/p/kingdoms...omance.html?m=1

This post has been edited by ProSuperSchool: Mar 8 2022, 09:04 PM

Yes like FF7 remake

ofc u need to finish the core gameplay first but the storyline can be cut into multiple parts.