Since this is my first ever, well the pictures aren't that good.. Anyway, here is some of them.. please tear it up with ur comments..

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#3 - I can't go back any further without hitting someone at d back


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why u get auntie for shooting?

His wife maybe ?
The model seems like Pregnant.

Exception for no4,5,8 & 9 the WB for the rest is quite messed up.

i'm not even an amateur photographer but i would say the pictures with the model in the room don't seem nice..

the lighting seems abit too much...i'm assuming you wanted to get a glimpse of shadow on her face on the first picture but the lighting seems to flood it too much...

Looks okay for me

omg... a lot of things out la bro..1stly r u even using an slr?
coz the colour seems out.. compo seems out..onli ur focus is there..

missperak wor...

i don`t see any problem getting your auntie to shoot...
not just MMC or pretty or cute girls have privillage to get shoot.....

pregnant so? can`t get shoot also???
shooting pregnant female indeed having more meaningful message than shooting MMC....

don`t lah expose the source....

i actually wanted to go home but my fren ask to stay, so i was not in d mood to take pictures, so wat i did was juz play abt .. wit fluorescent WB etc.. juz to keep myself occupied... if it wasn't for my camera autofocussing... even d pic wouldn't be in sharp as well..

This post has been edited by sinister: Aug 31 2007, 10:06 PM

It's best to focus the comments on the photography and not on the model. ANYONE or ANYTHING can be a photographer's model.

If you don't like to look at the model, just turn your tail and buzz off. Don't leave idiotic remarks. It will only make you look worse and not the photographer.

err.. i never mention d model.. she's a great person.. and i felt i let her down...

Wahhh really kena tear up by criticism ...

Pic 1 : The flash was too harsh, it cast a real nasty shadow over her nose and her left arm cast a shodow on her chin. Her tummy is buldging, ask the model to stand up straight next time.

Pic 2 : A real scary image, I couldn't see her eyes properly and like her pupil had reduced to a dot, really scary look. The thing directly on top her head must be the bracket for the bedside lamp? You could've get rid of it by a slight angle of your camera.

Pic 3 : If someone's blocking you next time and there is no way you can compose properly ... stand up and walk away.

Pic 4 : Rather candid shot but you should've angle your camera more to the left to have the sea as the background rather than the fence of someone's house.

Pic 5 : This one is good but decide where you wanna put the model, to the centre, right or left.

Pic 6 : Good composition, good lighting but the model like a lump of meat sitting by the seaside. Have her sit up straight before smiling at you.

Pic 7 : Good angle but if she wants to show off her tattoo like that there are other ways, this shoot looks as if you curi-curi shoot down her blouse. They call it voyeurism.

Pic 8 : This one's fine. Good candid.

Pic 9 : Good compo, thick make-up, nice smile.

Pic 10 : Nice compo but lighting too harsh, no distracting shadown but have the 'Do Not Disturb' sign hung outside the door so the Room Service people won't kacau you halfway thru the shoot, haha!

Overall good model, good make-up, suitable dressing but shots can definitely be improved. Keep up the good work!

Some might misunderstood my comment. It is directed to those saying bad model lar... not MMC lar... auntie lar...

Sorry if you think it was directed to you.

Pic 1... how come every says she's pregnant? need to ask her dat..
Pic 2.. need to keep dat in mind.. thanks
Pic 3.. wokey...
Pic 4 should have done recommended in pic 3
pic 5 Wokey..
Pic 6 good lighting? i thought it looks bad? On d sitting.. i really need to understand diz poses thing...
Pic 7 wokey
Pic 8 wokey?
Pic 9 thick make up? not sure abt dat..
pic 10 wokey...

Excuse me , i dint mean or doesnt critise on the model as what i reply is replying to the post above mine.
Hope you get what i'm trying to express.
I do apologize if you guys think that i'm critising.

This post has been edited by Andy0625: Aug 31 2007, 10:19 PM

ooh.. ur talking abt someone else.. sorry.. i was a bit sensitive today due to bad weather yesterday..

sorry abt that getting back to u unnecessarily..

Yea. I should have put quotes into my message.

My bad...

any chance to practise is good
keep shooting

yeah... here's a hint.. don't ever take pics when u have a temperature..