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 Orenzai's noob noob gallery, Pg 21- Backlit Leaf

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travis_ckf
post Aug 25 2007, 06:15 PM

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QUOTE(ac98 @ Aug 25 2007, 05:21 PM)
D40 not suitable for your lar ... should've bought at least D80 or D300-mah doh.gif laugh.gif
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As agree with ac98, one day the TS will hit the wall pretty soon. sweat.gif
travis_ckf
post Aug 31 2007, 08:58 PM

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As i agree with many u finally improve, but continue snapping more pics and learn more! Good for effort but u need to work even hard to get better results!
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post Sep 3 2007, 05:42 PM

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Orenzai, now u have done with exploring ur cam's abilities, so now ur mission is to capture pics at different times to get a different dramatic view. Say, taking beach shots at dawn or evening and find an angle that will make a hugh difference in yr pics. Good luck wink.gif
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post Sep 3 2007, 08:23 PM

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Yeah, apart of shooting landscapes or flowers, time to shoot something else (hint - portraits whistling.gif )
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post Sep 6 2007, 07:46 PM

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Beautiful shots on ur landscape, but as diwant says, try taking it on different timing.I believe u must read the august issue of digital camera to know more. wink.gif
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post Sep 6 2007, 08:07 PM

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I only can guide u if u wanna take portraits or pretty girls/models at events. I not that great in landscape and i believe u did better than me! tongue.gif
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post Sep 8 2007, 03:44 PM

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QUOTE(xandman @ Sep 8 2007, 02:24 PM)
ahahahaha...bro...
u need to put girl's pics...only then u get hit like crazy...=P
dun believe me?
juz try! hehehe...
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AGREE!!!!! thumbup.gif or else ppl will zzzz in ur thread.

QUOTE(orenzai @ Sep 8 2007, 02:57 PM)
no wonder shinchan and ahleong and bbtat and a few more people's gallery so popular... doh.gif
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Faham pun! tongue.gif
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post Sep 13 2007, 08:21 PM

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Ur pics dont mean anything this time, i have no idea what are u trying to catch.Unless if u have a zoom lens (55-200 at least), maybe u can capture some action nearby.

If i were u i will delete all these pics and pretend i never went n take these pics. Overall maybe some credit for ur effort but ur pics really dont mean anything. Sorry.
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post Oct 30 2007, 08:37 PM

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Perhaps u have improved but u r not there yet. Let me tell u why:

1-5 : Those are mainly candid shots. It will be better if u managed to go near (although not advisble and dangerous) or perhaps get a good zoom lens will make some difference (70-300mm).

6 - Still okay

10- the root should be at the back, not front.

11- The best pic from ur series. smile.gif

12. Compo could be better. I prefer the trunk to be at the bottom middle.

13-14. candid shoots. Pic 13 suffers frm lack of focus. I wont post it if i were u.

15. A zoom lens will make a better effect. Compo could be better. But the flash is effective in that pic.

16.WB out alittle. The legs has been chopped. Its a no.

19. Hmm, i quite like tat pic. I would prefer not to use flash but try jump up the ISO and set the correct shutter speed settings. I now its not easy but i prefer that pic w/o flash.

Overall, maybe i give u credit for effort, but u just not there yet. Nice try wink.gif
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post Oct 30 2007, 08:56 PM

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QUOTE(orenzai @ Oct 30 2007, 08:44 PM)
nod.gif you are so right...you get my POV... the shots are just not there... you even pin point lil details that i missed out...like the choped leg doh.gif ... i appreciate your comments...thank you very much...do tell me if you spotted anything wrong with my pics... i will try to improve..
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No worries. I would like to see ur day 2 n day 3 pics. Hopefully u improved then. wink.gif
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post Nov 5 2007, 11:17 PM

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Hmm some improvements here!

Pic 1,2, 5 & 9 will be my pick.

pic 3 - Compo can be better to have a greater impact. The WB seems out too. wink.gif

pic 7 - closer shot will be better.


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post Dec 16 2007, 11:59 AM

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No 10 , 11 and 12 will be my pick. The rest are pretty average. Perhaps work more on PP on enhancing ur landscape pics in order to bring more wow on ur pics.

Btw i really like ur pic no 11 notworthy.gif
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post Feb 2 2008, 09:55 AM

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Beautiful pics, man u have improved alot! smile.gif U easily make the d40 proud!!!! thumbup.gif
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post Apr 16 2008, 10:15 PM

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No 2,6,8, 11 & 13 is good to me. No 14 is abit wasted due to framming. However watch out coz ur pics looked pretty warm.


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post Apr 23 2008, 07:48 PM

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Man on the drums, ur angle doesnt seem effecting. Well this one is pretty subjective, i cant able to convey the words i wanted to say or not sure how u thinks, but my feedback is the pic has no effect to me.

Try different angles, that all i can say wink.gif
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post Apr 25 2008, 01:54 PM

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Exposure is fine for me too, but the 1st 2 pics doesnt seem that effective to me. The last one did, after u convey ur message. Overall not a bad effort, but hoping for better stoty telling pics next time.

 

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