QUOTE(168257061 @ Apr 24 2008, 09:37 PM)
woot woot...
nice short story

#2 looks great.
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QUOTE(timothyy @ Apr 24 2008, 10:39 PM)
I like the 3rd one. The centre is the subject... the surrounding ppl look other place and centre look to the camera... nice... You can publish this in the street shooting...
street photography? heard of it but i dunno what it is...
QUOTE(kelvinyam @ Apr 25 2008, 07:59 AM)
Orenzai, I like the last crowd shot. However I'd use a faster SS next time to freeze the movement as some of them appears to be blurry. You can brighten it up a little as it seems to be under exposed on my screen.
i wanted it to be more blur if possible so that only the contre guy is sharp

will take note of the underexposed thingy...
QUOTE(zio @ Apr 25 2008, 10:13 AM)
Its a little under for the last shot but it gets my vote as well. Very nicely captured.

i think my comp is a lil under lor... gotta adjust a bit..
QUOTE(shootkk @ Apr 25 2008, 11:51 AM)
Orenzai,
You were posting in the other thread that you want comments. I replied to that thread too. You said that you like to shoot landscape but in your gallery I find all kinds of shots - seems like no particular preference from you.
As for comments, here's some of mine. I hope that you can take them constructively.
I am no expert as I am still learning but this is my 2 cents worth:
1. Your shooting reflects your age. You are young and full of energy and you are hasty. I find most of your shots are either done in a hurry or are random shots. You need to learn to slow down and compose your pictures a bit more carefully. Also sometimes you try to take in too much into your frame. Have you heard the saying that 'less is more'? Try to focus on a single subject and make it stand out. Some of your pics have vague subjects - meaning we have to take a while to try and figure out what is it that you are trying to show us.
2. I don't know why but I find most of your pics underexposed. Is it intentional? Try to get your exposure correct when taking the pic. Don't rely too much on PP and it will save you a lot of time. I know that sometimes you like to fade out the colours of your pic and I am not sure why you are doing so. Is there a reason for you to fade it out instead of leaving it in vivid colours?
3. You seem also not to be very well versed in the technical areas of operating a camera. Things like WB, colour temperatures, aperture control, flash control, EV adjustments. Try reading up on these and get a good grasp on it as it will show on your pic. Blaming the lighting in a certain place for the unnatural colour cast on skin tones is not an excuse.
once again thanks for taking your tiem to write such a long critique...
1. yeah, i realise that when i go for outing with the older ones(very experienced uncles and adults) i tend to snap more pics and i think i gotta slow down. i always see them taking a long time to set up but for me, i just point and shoot

maybe i gotta think properly to compose my shots.
2. nope, the underexposed photos were unintentional. i think i shall look at my histogram more often next time. the desaturation issue, i think so far i only desaturated a few photos(cards and one product shot). will try not to do so next time.
3. i am still not very flexible with the settings. I always forget to set back the settings after wanting to take a particular shot. EG when i wanna take under expose a photo i would minus the ev but then when i continue shooting i would forget to change it back

sometimes after going out from an indoor environment i forget to lower the ISO and such. that kinda bugs me though. About the WB, i am not familir with that

i gotta read up more and be more careful about the color cast next time.
in the other topic i was sayin that i prefer taking landscapes, but nevertheless, anything that has to do with photography interests me too

btw i really appreciate your long explanation..thanks
This post has been edited by orenzai: Apr 25 2008, 01:12 PM